Redsunworld
Hey guys, I find this novel incredibly interesting and I enjoy reading this a lot. The story setting and the characters are great. It would be better if the grammatical errors are removed. If the author wants help in correcting his errors to make his chapters easier to read, he can reply to this message and I will help him out.
I do like the story so far but my homest opinion is that the mc doesn’t seem to be the mc. You read 20% about the mc 70% about his right hand and 10% about other characters. At this point it should be the right hand man’s Story (comes off as stronger than MC) … whenever story switches To mc we see him mysteriously show up for 2 chapters.. he’s More powerful and then disappears For another 30 chapters… idk just my honest opinion but would like to see more focus on my and what he’s Doing i mean it is his story…
The story is great, the characters that we were introduced to were good specially the MC he’s a likeable guy who make the right decisions based on his background, unlike those novels where a thousand year old immortal reincarnate to a teenage and suddenly act like a teenager, in here the characters act true to themselves meaning an archdemon will still be a ruthless bloodthirsty demon, having a strong character is really nice as i hate reading about MCs who are mentally weak, now this novel has a major issue, the grammar is extremely bad and sometimes breaks the immersion, the novel needs an editor but other than that it has the potential to be great
1) MY FAVORITE THING IS THE PACING BETWEEN RANKS Unlike other reincarnated MC's he uses his knowledge for rapid progression and is not a pathetic beta cuck who goes slow He had created his own bloodline in his last life which seeked perfection and greater power over the other paths which were magi,arcanist,warlocks with their own disadvantages. 2) Love the MC, he's Fang Yuan(Reverend Insanity) towards the enemies and extremely caring towards his people. 3)Actual character development as he grows and starts to trust a handful of people who fully reciprocate it by putting their life on the line for him.
My review sucks ok I'm not really good at being analytical in reviewing a story Writing quality:in the latest updates there little errors in the grammar Stability of updating:the current updates is looking good it's just needs more time and power stones Am happy that the update is not taking to long like months ago Story development:the story progression is good and don't feel rushed and yeah I like the current progression of the story not too slow not to fast And I hope it's will not turn out harem Cause I FUCKING HATE IT!! well it's up to you to decide Character design: hmmmmmmmmm.........**** me this sucks ok here we go the main focus now of the story is zatiel having his army being build (Ok I will learn how to write a decent review next time) World background: currently it's good that the revealing of other places or planes is good cause of the environment nature of being a high world and of course having many world's Ok I don't depth too much and my review sucks ok and my grammar is CRINGY because English is just my country second language I will try to a write good review next. I hope others that review should write their review in more detailed cause it's fucking annoying and doesn't help much the writer🤦
Great read, mc has a great scheming mind (which makes sense considering he is very old) and his main goal is getting more power through various methods as he went from struggling to take down bandits to being able to crush suns with his bare hands as far as I have read (chapter 700), there is also a great plot (though it isn't explained for a while since the mc at the start had nowhere near enough power to start it)