Review Detail of Wanderingimmortal in Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

My review sucks ok I'm not really good at being analytical in reviewing a story Writing quality:in the latest updates there little errors in the grammar Stability of updating:the current updates is looking good it's just needs more time and power stones Am happy that the update is not taking to long like months ago Story development:the story progression is good and don't feel rushed and yeah I like the current progression of the story not too slow not to fast And I hope it's will not turn out harem Cause I FUCKING HATE IT!! well it's up to you to decide Character design: hmmmmmmmmm.........**** me this sucks ok here we go the main focus now of the story is zatiel having his army being build (Ok I will learn how to write a decent review next time) World background: currently it's good that the revealing of other places or planes is good cause of the environment nature of being a high world and of course having many world's Ok I don't depth too much and my review sucks ok and my grammar is CRINGY because English is just my country second language I will try to a write good review next. I hope others that review should write their review in more detailed cause it's fucking annoying and doesn't help much the writer🤦