Review Detail of algrife93 in Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

The story is great, the characters that we were introduced to were good specially the MC he’s a likeable guy who make the right decisions based on his background, unlike those novels where a thousand year old immortal reincarnate to a teenage and suddenly act like a teenager, in here the characters act true to themselves meaning an archdemon will still be a ruthless bloodthirsty demon, having a strong character is really nice as i hate reading about MCs who are mentally weak, now this novel has a major issue, the grammar is extremely bad and sometimes breaks the immersion, the novel needs an editor but other than that it has the potential to be great