I do like the story so far but my homest opinion is that the mc doesn’t seem to be the mc. You read 20% about the mc 70% about his right hand and 10% about other characters. At this point it should be the right hand man’s Story (comes off as stronger than MC) … whenever story switches To mc we see him mysteriously show up for 2 chapters.. he’s More powerful and then disappears For another 30 chapters… idk just my honest opinion but would like to see more focus on my and what he’s Doing i mean it is his story…
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