Reviews of A Solitary God In A Dark Multiverse
A Solitary God In A Dark Multiverse
LucianoWrites
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Honestly I am completely baffled. The fact that this story hasn't taken off and made it to the top of the charts confuses me to no end. It's been a few weeks now that I've dedicated my time to reading this wonderful piece of literature. The past week of which I have given every single one of my power stones to thrust it up myself. And still it hovers at the bottom of the rankings despite it's perfection. So now I'm obligated by my moral compass to try to rectify that in what little way I can. Making a dreaded review. You know the thing most try not to do because it takes too much time or that some just bs their way through. But getting to the story now I can truly say it is an overall great piece of work. Never have I truly been able to say with all my heart that a story is so deserving of 5 stars on on 5 categories. With each passing chapter I find myself drawn in more and more to the MC's world and with rapt fascination I watch as he/it grows to understand himself/itself as both a young God coming into it's powers. As well as the choices these powers subtly have over him influencing these choices. The character is fleshed out. The background is fleshed out. I've yet to spot a grammar error let alone a spell check. The complete originality is so far beyond my scope of understanding how the author could even be releasing this not unpolished diamond in the rough. But already glistening and cut jewel of immeasurable worth on a daily basis. And sometimes multiple chapters. That it makes me truly wonder if everyone else is completely blinded by mainly crud stories that are going no where. Whose only saving grace is the boredom of the readers and their casual reluctance to even spot check the author for all of their inconsistencies. That we all have just grown numb to it. So used to sub par literature that when truly great works come our way we back out and squander our time entertaining these butchered tales. Well this sort of turned into a rant and for that I do apologise. But I sincerely hope that you give this story a chance despite what I've gone off topic about. I've done my best without spoiling anything. Just I give it a chance and maybe who knows you find as much pleasure in reading it as I have.
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This is less a novel and more of a textbook, it's not impressive how much knowledge you convey when you can't do it in an interesting way There is no plot, characters feel like robots and not people, world building is erratic. **: I don't have patience to wait 20 to 30 chapters for something to happen
First thing’s first, I just want to say this story is very well written. Not only does it have good grammar and spelling and whatnot but actual good characterization, realistic dialogue, and engaging prose. Kudos to that! I don’t know how many stories I’ve dropped because subpar writing and poor grammar were messing with my head too much. Personally, I’m not usually a big fan of first-person narration, as it’s more difficult in my opinion to capture the depth of a character, as it doesn’t leave the reader with much room to imagine for themselves. But the MC of this story is well fleshed out and has a depth about him the moment we begin reading the first few paragraphs. The system as well, is quirky and mysterious and captures our attention as well. Details in this novel are painstakingly drawn out, everything is explained. The fundamentals of the world’s laws are presented in a nice, organized manner. If you’re interested in complex world-building and meticulous details as well as logic, then I would highly recommend this title to you. The plot does take a while to really take off. You’re not jumping into a whirlwind of action right away and instead must discover the rules and boundaries along with the MC one little step at a time. It might take a bit of patience but the story is worthwhile. All in all a great read, and if you’re already interested in this genre then I would say taking a look at this title is a must!
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Initially i was enhoying the direction that this book was going in. Althos was constatnly developing powers and the multiverse of the story was interesting and diverse. I think the story truly fell for me when Althos kept doing good acts and shying away from violence and making his undead timid and weak. Then came Althos’s hypocrisy as a character as he quickly villainozed Morehammer as a tyrant when not many chapters ago he forced farmers into his worship with punjshments. For the scale of the multiverse and the abilities he has, he seems to want to keep from expanding from the solar system and expanding his swarm which is honestly frustrating. On top of that, it seems that he gets followers that worship him in an instant way too quickly like the demons. This is a broken story that I hope the author fixes by giving Althos a clear Alignmrnts, clear goals, expansion outisde his solar system, taking away his hypocrisy, not giving side characters one dimensional personalities and making them instantyl worship althos through one action, utilizing Althos’s pwers more and his various legions, and creating stronger enemies that actaully matter and making battles planets wide with many falling. I hope thag this sotry gets fixed as the befgining was quite interesting.
This story is pretty amazing IMO. Or maybe that's just me being a video game fanatic myself hahaha. Anyways, the story and the world are well-explained and I'm pleasantly surprise that there is little to no grammar error being found in this read. The story may be slow but is definitely worth a read as it explores everything in a meticulous manner. From the MC's fleshed out perspective, the rules of the world, to the complex world building. A highly recommend read, I beseech you all to give this book a chance.
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Hi everyone I started to read this yesterday not up to date but of the 50 some ch I have read I can in all confidence say that it is by far one of the best God-Mc story’s out there now this story is not for every one but you should give it a try. Some thing I would like though is that the Mc be more evil but that is personal preference more than anything