the wall of text hurts my eye plz fix

I haven't finished the first chapter but it is basically unreadable. I don't know if there are two or 1 character taking. I hope that the writing improves but...

don't you have to worship a god to be a paladin or a cleric?

same

that's a sheep in wolfs clothing

no infrastructure to build them mabey.

so oil is not a pollutant unless you pull it from the ground so there is no such thing as pollution free oil

we need more

So this is confusing me when you say biotech and also use it in the title I asume you meen living biological tecnology from plants an fungi and not the actual mening for biotech which is any tech that works in the body from prothetics all the way to gene modification.

Nah u just have to spice thing up a bit from time to time