Leave constructive criticism if it's not to your taste. Don't just slam your face on your keyboard while looking for iq points.

The novel is honestly one of my all time favorites. some parts seem a little rushed compared to the novel. but other than that, it's a great adaption so far. It's more than worth the coins to read. just release faster so I can pay more then in turn read more.

Another good chapter, thank you for the great content! 😁

Always a good read. Thank you for the chapter 😁

Am I the only one finding something wrong with this chapter. It seems like it's missing a lot of words. Never had a problem till now.

I want to start by saying kudos to the author. it seems you have many fans. With a lot of positive feedback from what I can tell. so I don't really know how I feel about this one. I only made it to ch22 so far. I feel things are over detailed. Half of the chapters are just the "system" telling the mc his new abilities over domains/subdomains, spells, etc. It's just a flood of information, which makes it feel less like a story and more of a wikia page. but that could all be chalked up to my own personal taste in writing. Another issue I've felt iffy on was his alignment. honestly the first 20 or so chapters he doesn't feel like chaotic good. If anything he's along the lines of neutral good, maybe chaotic good. I've played years of pathfinder, and dnd 3.5/5e. With dm's who are pretty strict on alignment, and action correlation. but I thought hey start of the story maybe its building up. so I went through the comments, to see others view points on it. Seems like it does a total 180, The mc turns predominantly evil(based on the comments i read). then sugar coats it with some good actions. so to summarize up my questions are: 1. As the chapters progress from 22 onward. does it focus more on the story. or will it continue with the annoying banter with the "system" and the high amount of explaining each and every level up, new skill etc. 2.does the mc actually align with chaotic neutral. an individualist, who is all about freedom, doesn't abide by laws etc. or does he flip back and forth of evil and good. if I have some stuff wrong, or if things change please comment. I'm curious to see if its worth investing more time and votes. quality of writing is good 4/5 story progresses at a snails pace in the beginning 1/5 character design is interesting, but I find the intelegent system aspect takes away from the story.(my own bias, I find it annoying) 3/5 your updates seem quite regular from looking at the times. 4/5 world background i found intriguing and what almost makes me want to stay 4/5

Thank you for letting me know. I'll give this a read then. 😁

Did he reappear at all? I was curious about starting this story. But I always check comments first. After reading through yours and the sub comments. I would like to know. Since a weak minded mc who leaves his enemies alive is enough for me to not want to waste my time.

I'm quite enjoying this one so far. I was getting tired of all the lawful/good doormat protagonists. Also I enjoy that revenge isn't something that the author tries to build up for a hundred chapters. Instead, you **** with him, then shortly after you regret doing it. If you're lucky enough to live with regret. I recommend this one if you're looking for a protagonist who isn't going to give his enemies a second chance. I look forward to reading more, especially with the quick releases. Cheers🍻