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Review Detail of Sithis1987 in A Solitary God In A Dark Multiverse

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Sithis1987
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Change the title to "The god of manipulation, lies and necromancy tries to appear good by healing people(sometimes) " and then this novel makes perfect sense. That's like 70% of the novel anyway. Oh yeah also add the tags planet destroyer, apocalypse bringer, ruler of undead and zerg the swarm - how empires of insects rule the world. P.S the alignment of the mc is absurdly not balanced the story tries to make him appear neutral but he is definitely evil, at least that's how he appears to the readers. 70% of the story is spent on describing his evil deeds in detail from destroying planets, to manipulating, blackmailing, threatening others or indulging or promoting sin and corruption. but its cool cause "he now healed all living things in this world, so all the mayhem we red in detail the past 150 chapters is off set by that one line so we are back to balance baby." doesn't actually make the cut in keeping balance to the readers mind. Also the scene where children are run down by undead while fleeing on their lives on a planet that he obliterated all living things and turns everything into undead should not be presented to the readers and is not off set by him healing a goblins arm. P.S.2 i like the world building and the system that has been presented but it seems the author wanted to make the mc kinda dark and edgy, a little bit more dark than a dark hero which is fine in general but not when you want to create an illusion of balance. The writing is really good and the presentation is really good as well, the grammar is excellent.

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A Solitary God In A Dark Multiverse

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LucianoWrites
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Hi Sisthis! Thank you for your review :) I'm glad you appear to like it, and I'll take your comments into consideration. I think they're really funny and I'm glad you don't mind that this is a dark story. I really like dark stuff and I'm glad you shared your insights with me.