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Review Detail of Wanderingforworks in A Solitary God In A Dark Multiverse

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Initially i was enhoying the direction that this book was going in. Althos was constatnly developing powers and the multiverse of the story was interesting and diverse. I think the story truly fell for me when Althos kept doing good acts and shying away from violence and making his undead timid and weak. Then came Althos’s hypocrisy as a character as he quickly villainozed Morehammer as a tyrant when not many chapters ago he forced farmers into his worship with punjshments. For the scale of the multiverse and the abilities he has, he seems to want to keep from expanding from the solar system and expanding his swarm which is honestly frustrating. On top of that, it seems that he gets followers that worship him in an instant way too quickly like the demons. This is a broken story that I hope the author fixes by giving Althos a clear Alignmrnts, clear goals, expansion outisde his solar system, taking away his hypocrisy, not giving side characters one dimensional personalities and making them instantyl worship althos through one action, utilizing Althos’s pwers more and his various legions, and creating stronger enemies that actaully matter and making battles planets wide with many falling. I hope thag this sotry gets fixed as the befgining was quite interesting.

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A Solitary God In A Dark Multiverse

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Hi there! I understand these criticisms and the story is a slow work that takes a while to get going but it does hit a point where these things happen. That said I respect that it takes a while to get there which is not what everyone is into. I appreciate your review and I hope you have a nice day.