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_Neith_
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Honestly I am completely baffled. The fact that this story hasn't taken off and made it to the top of the charts confuses me to no end. It's been a few weeks now that I've dedicated my time to reading this wonderful piece of literature. The past week of which I have given every single one of my power stones to thrust it up myself. And still it hovers at the bottom of the rankings despite it's perfection. So now I'm obligated by my moral compass to try to rectify that in what little way I can. Making a dreaded review. You know the thing most try not to do because it takes too much time or that some just bs their way through. But getting to the story now I can truly say it is an overall great piece of work. Never have I truly been able to say with all my heart that a story is so deserving of 5 stars on on 5 categories. With each passing chapter I find myself drawn in more and more to the MC's world and with rapt fascination I watch as he/it grows to understand himself/itself as both a young God coming into it's powers. As well as the choices these powers subtly have over him influencing these choices. The character is fleshed out. The background is fleshed out. I've yet to spot a grammar error let alone a spell check. The complete originality is so far beyond my scope of understanding how the author could even be releasing this not unpolished diamond in the rough. But already glistening and cut jewel of immeasurable worth on a daily basis. And sometimes multiple chapters. That it makes me truly wonder if everyone else is completely blinded by mainly crud stories that are going no where. Whose only saving grace is the boredom of the readers and their casual reluctance to even spot check the author for all of their inconsistencies. That we all have just grown numb to it. So used to sub par literature that when truly great works come our way we back out and squander our time entertaining these butchered tales. Well this sort of turned into a rant and for that I do apologise. But I sincerely hope that you give this story a chance despite what I've gone off topic about. I've done my best without spoiling anything. Just I give it a chance and maybe who knows you find as much pleasure in reading it as I have.

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A Solitary God In A Dark Multiverse

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Pope_Victor
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I don't know if this is the original it's on royalroad but i don't know

_Neith_
_Neith_Lv15_Neith_

Thank you for bringing that too my attention! I found the story in question same author it seems thankfully! But it seems that's where the similarities end. From a quick glance through the first three chapters reading a couple of paragraphs and then skipping a few and reading more I can tell that this story is a revamp of major proportions. And that the one on Royal road was the diamond in the rough that needed some love. He has changed the complete Dynamics of how the main character should have been and got rid of most of the repetitive writing style that could have quite easily deterred me from reading his work. Making me even more pleased with his current project and development for his current world and character. Though it appears some things stayed the same far many more were taken away in the pursuit of a more approachable and enthralling tale.

Pope_Victor:I don't know if this is the original it's on royalroad but i don't know
LucianoWrites
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Hi there! The original is on Royal Road and let me, the author be the first person to say... it’s bad. Or at least it’s really bad in comparison to this one. Please don’t hold that against me. This is a complete and utter revamp of that story that isn’t awful. But yes, this is a rewrite :)

Pope_Victor:I don't know if this is the original it's on royalroad but i don't know
LucianoWrites
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I appreciate you checking out the original! I love the original but it’s... it’s real bad. I love it so much but goodness it is ROUGH. So much stuff in it doesn’t make sense. Funnily enough this story is actually closer to the original envisionment I had in mind when I started writing the original but obviously turned away from VERY quickly. I’ve mentioned the original in an authors note in an early chapter and I’m pretty sure I said it wasn’t good. Which was accurate.

_Neith_:Thank you for bringing that too my attention! I found the story in question same author it seems thankfully! But it seems that's where the similarities end. From a quick glance through the first three chapters reading a couple of paragraphs and then skipping a few and reading more I can tell that this story is a revamp of major proportions. And that the one on Royal road was the diamond in the rough that needed some love. He has changed the complete Dynamics of how the main character should have been and got rid of most of the repetitive writing style that could have quite easily deterred me from reading his work. Making me even more pleased with his current project and development for his current world and character. Though it appears some things stayed the same far many more were taken away in the pursuit of a more approachable and enthralling tale.
Pope_Victor
Pope_VictorLv12Pope_Victor

I like the story in royalroad im gonna read this one too

LucianoWrites
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You’re so nice & I appreciate you! I like this version more but I’m still gonna keep writing the original.

Pope_Victor:I like the story in royalroad im gonna read this one too
HurleytheWolf3113
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I'm going to write a fanfiction based on this story. My story is going to star a goddess who is named Aten.