Comments of chapter undefined of GOT/ASOIAF: Break the Wheel
GOT/ASOIAF: Break the Wheel
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This second marriage nonsense is really stupid without dragons to back it up. Only Aegon the Conqueror had two wives and he had married before conquering Westeros.
it's true old valyria had harems but look where that takes them they died along with their dragons and your mc would have followed suit, if not for that stupid armor plot you came up with
Pretending_Author:True, and dragon lords of old Valyria had harems as well. It's a good thing Eragon will have dragons in the future. :)
So many beautiful women and none for the MC, besides, there are already several chapters and there is no trace of the MC, nor his thoughts, if his state. Just POVs which I don't understand why I have to read if they are not related to the MC. I mean, they are people with whom the MC probably will not interact in his entire life, therefore I see it as irrelevant.
this is good .... although considering that it's an au story and that u have added people to the story you should probably explain to the readers how they fit in. I know it took a while for me to pick up on some of these new characters as I was reading which is only made more difficult to follow along with the constant switches in pov. otherwise keep it up.
AU, I thought it would be something light, but it's practically a reconstruction, honestly I wanted to stop at Dragonstone, but I continued with some hope that I would still understand the world, nothing against AUs, but if you're going to change the whole plot for me it's not more so attractive, anyway... it's already become a mess of speculation, which I don't like at all.
