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I don’t mind the internal monologues as long as it’s not cutting into the actual content. Meaning: if you’re just going to release X amount of words per chapter, don’t make the internal monologues count towards the word count. That can just be extra content.
The MC is an idiot. Why would he willingly fall for Tatia knowing what he knows? I don’t care what feelings I had for her, I wouldn’t allow them to develop knowing canon Klaus and Elijah also fall for doppelgängers. It’s not worth the drama. And I wouldn’t want to be a slave to the doppelgänger magnetic attraction that brings the two doppelgängers together.
This is a stupid way of doing this. All he needs to do is make a master list of what is needed (which he seems to already have done) and send copies to the local stores. Store managers can prepare orders for free for pickup. Some can even arrange delivery.