Miami_XM

MC has trouble learning...?

Why is he still in pain? Months of coma time should've had him healed up if dystrophied muscles

Michonne

Best write down you're a natural Occlumens..

Rins already dead?

Immortal Human is a race option in Yggdrasil. One of the Pleiades, Aureole Omega, is an Immortal Human. And shes got pretty important responsibilities within the tomb so its not like shes a grunt despite being human

This feels like heavy AI influence in the story. Just a bunch of little things piling up

This is the second complete delete and reupload. Next time a heads up, or just a single chapter as a note left would be nice. Don't know if you know, but if you delete the entire story it makes it so you are unable to open the story, instead getting an error message and making getting to the authors page to find the new upload difficult.

Honestly, it's pretty funny. Only gripe is the Mc and the way he acts. I get that he's tryna finesse them of everything they've got but damn does he need to be a rude little shit about it? Even when they're trying to help him out he's obnoxiously rude because he knows he can be. He's got all the power in the relationship. Even when Minato is trying to help out his obviously inexperienced young son from his perspective against a suspicious chunnin he gets called an Idiot. Like damn man, he's just trying to help, he doesn't know his son got body-snatched; relax a bit.