Comments of chapter undefined of In Marvel as Superman

That is not how Pym particles work, you can’t make infinite matter out of it.

This chapter is all over the place. Nothing make sense. Don't forget it's superman we're talking about. The guy who never dodge because he know not a things can injure him. The guy who can kill a god alone. The guy who the stability of the universe depend on him. And I'm talii g about the DC universe who's a lot more dangerous than marvel. In DC, Thanos would pass for a street thug. The guy who always fight alone because he know nobody is strong enough to help him.

Bruh...he just got reincarnated after living a life of suffering with amazing powers. Few in the universe could ever hope to match him. But he's making one plan after another like he's got no time to enjoy life. WTH is this?

things are getting very complicated. He just did these things in just a day... what about future?

This is all over the place also pym particles don't work that way.

Why not just head to the Sun?...

The mc needa to take a second to relax. I felt like I was reading a fever dream. It’s All over the place

Yeah, you lost me with the pym particles and vibranium part, bye.

You go very fast in the plot you are practically thinking about getting all kinds of power and traveling to other planets Calm down a bit and take it easy

is this story any good so far doesn't seem like it

Slow down author. The plots moving way too fast like its on steroids

his thoughts are running around,focus on getting the reactors blueprint frist

Too many plans

the arrangements of paragraphs are all over the place. he mentions about something then suddenly mentions other things then back to the first topic. its so confusing. one example of this is the forge. he's just contemplating about companion then suddenly mentions forging .wth

Pym particles and story build is why I stopped at the beginning of this chapter. One note at the beginning could have solved all the extra notes. Also did he not talk with anyone for days?

Exp

Realy? no better reason?... and you read up on the lore...

Thanks for the chapter and can't wait for more. Also, try to find a way to absorb the infinity stones, for they will make you powerful enough to take on the Living Tribunal, and especially the reality stone, which will allow to create anything out of reality.

Sigh guess this is a drop… book seemed interesting too but the pacing is just way to fast with barely any dialogue

horrible writing. ive read diary style that was better done then this