Maybe hire Claire?? Wasn't she like very good at her job? Wait what even was her job?

That's one of the most glaring problems of trying to write a smart/genius MC, the author isn't that smart.

I think you meant shurikenjutsu? Cause it said he knew ninjutsu too but then he threw kunais.

It's not as much as repeating, more of the wonky-ness of the AI and the author not editing it out, kinda off putting actually, I have no problem with AI as a crutch for writing but atleast give the effort to smoothen it out in the editing phase.

Maan just get a dna test and say surprise I'm your sensei's kid or something. 😂

Yikesss, danzo really gonn be the winner of the Darwin awards this time huh? Hahahahah

But it literally doesn't say that on the tasj description, all that's written is defeat a kage level shinobi, he did it, imo this feels like a contrived way of introducing tension and drama, cuz they're gonna question him, gonna needle him for answers and stuff, and he'll prolly tell an obvious lie or a lame excuse of not feeling worthy of it cuz of -insert reason- but it wont matter cus it's literally an order for promotion in a ninja village. But yeah that's my take on it, I'll have to wait to see what the author cooks up.

So putting the jinjuriki in a coma didn't count as defeating a kage level ninja?

"Unbeknownst to him, he noticed several men following him..." How does he notice them if it's unbeknownst to him?????

Yeah like, bro telling the truth about the Uchiha massacre like it ain't an S class secret by the higher ups, and then the supposed anbu monitoring them doesn't report the physical changes of his body and his seemingly new personality, like damn if ur a trained killing machine and one of the elites i think you should be able to spot sudden changes in routine from people, like it ain't even gradual lol.

What I think people don't like too, and me personally is that you didn't just do this right from the start, you could've made it like this from the beginning so that we don't jave to read about the god nerfing him, that way it would feel more organic, you say it's a loophole the last chapter but it feels more like a nerf.

So it says that it get's better at ch 10, I'm at ch 28 now and bro just dissed the hokage tryna act like some hotshot, dfck is up with him? I know that he has a garou template but damn you shoulda just put garou there to begin with, this just some power wank tryna act like it's different, some edgy ass MC that prolly would be dead for spouting all that stuff about how he hates ninjas, and that he doesn't wanna be tied down by the Hokage's orders and the village, like bro, one "ah so it's treason then" from Hiruzen and you'll be hunted down and it won't be an Uchiha massacre but a Hatake slaughter, corny ahh MC.

So wait, he has reactive evolution, but he can't evolve so that he can use chakra? Why?

I can't really say anything but it really feels like it's all just show and no tell, like galladon did this, then he did this, his father talked to him about this, and that, but they don't really have any dialogue with eachother, feels more like it's just a diary than a story.

Did you not read? His old mom's dead, and his father was a dead beat, now he's experiencing what it means to have a loving mother, a family, ofc he's gonna move on.

Maybe try implementing CloudFlares defense too? They use lava lamps as sources for randomized codes for their antivirus software.

I get it thanks, just would've been smoother imo if the nurses asked him where he got that many weapons or something, just little details u know?

yeah well it doesn't matter anymore cuz he just made an even better and more discreet weapon anyway so yeah this discussion is moot.

Bro it took 30 chaps for him to get out, I'm not saying it's bad, but it's just the chapters could be longer or be progressed faster??? I feel like we just wasted time but he did get new abilities and equipment, just wondering where all his minions is.

yeah and they risk alienating an S rank craftsman who they have an okay relationship with, a craftsman who survived a red gate dungeon, lets's not forget that korea isn't that big and he could just go to the USA, he probably won't, but the korean association doesn't know that and them taking his weapon, a weapon he made from an s rank boss is just begging for someone to leave your country.