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Then, while his body was still enveloped by the golden hue from the merit, he soon condensed the second flower, signaling he had cast his Dao Will. All eyes were on him to watch for the third and final flower. The people saw a phantom of it rapidly condensing, and people believed it was already guaranteed that a ner Eternal would be born.- AnteChao17dCommented
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Tbh, I don't think it was anything of pride or arrogance at all. He played the hand he had, cause otherwise he would have had to go along with what she was saying, feign ignorance or something else. Frankly this is better as it lets Hermione know that she can't hide it from him and in a way be careful (her choice or not obviously *unspeakables*). If anything this paragraph about how Harry dealt with it and how you wrote due to arrogance or pride just makes me feel like I missed something when reading as it didn't come across as such. Anyways, thanks for the chapter, can't wait to get more!
I also know that some of you will think it was short-sighted of Harry to reveal what he knew, and you're right. It's his main character flaw. For all his talks, Harry is very prideful when it comes to his intelligence and likes to lord it over his opponents. Plus, even if he doesn't admit it, he was emotional at seeing Hermione for the first time in almost a year and a half and wasn't really thinking straight. - AnteChao1mthReplied to AshuraMikoto
No I don't think so. I don't know why, but every month this fic on the last 10 days of the month doesn't update at all until the start of the next month.
Ch 290 Picking Her Up (5)detailMax-Level Learning Ability: Facing The Cliff And Repenting For 80 YearsEastern · Girl In Short Skirt - AnteChao1mthCommentedCh 125 Long Lost Scroll
- AnteChao3mthCommented
'Could you specify?' or 'Could you be more specific?'
"Your majesty, could be specified?" asked the Medicine Saint. - AnteChao3mthCommented
Cleaver --》Clever
"Cleaver, aren't we?" she uttered. "Some of it will remain in your world to increase resources and the overall betterment of this world. The rest will go to us." A deafening silence enveloped the room. - AnteChao3mthReplied to ChristianLeontsini
Yes, its worded weirded as a calamity to the MC, however he is cutting off Karma and protecting the Kunlun Field; as well as protecting any sorts of points he gets from the people in the Field also.
"In the 2362nd year of the Preach Era, Yu Qiutian attempted to invade the Kunlun Field and seize the Immortal Dao. You discovered him in time and successfully survived his attack. You survived a calamity and obtained a survival reward—Divine Power, 'Dao Breaking Wind'." - AnteChao3mthCommented
'if not re-sealing'? Feels as though something else should be there Like 'if not for (insert name of person or say 'if not for us') re-sealing'.
"Not so bad? Do you know how dangerous the Abyss Gap is? Thousands of Emperors from all classes have sealed this thing, but the aura released from it has always managed to corrode the seal. Heaven knows what horror would exit that thing if not re-sealing it every generation." - AnteChao3mthCommented
Now ---》Not
"No, I absolutely will now allow his tentacles to spread to this world," rebuked Tong Ruobing, making Mu Lei sigh. "My retreat is almost over. Wait for me, and I'll replace you." - AnteChao3mthCommented
'I' before 'Know'.
Tong Ruobing immediately frowned, "Know a little. It's one of the few Forbidden Lands of the Endless Void." She has read some of the Star Monarch Mountain records and saw the Abyss Gap information. However, no records revealed what secrets lay in that place. - AnteChao3mthReplied to King_GluttonyCh 181 Chapter 181: The Lemon Tree
- AnteChao3mthReplied to LordVoidCh 83 83: Why so serious?
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This chapter made me have a bad taste in my mouth because of how screwed over Harry is getting. In my opinion he should both show off despite what people would think of the comparision to Tom, and then he should find a way to turn this back on Dumbledore.
Ch 171 Chapter 171: Of Dystopian Declarations - AnteChao4mthReplied to Kumatsume
Yeah, David Tennant.
I smiled widely and bellowed, "Allons-y!!" as I pushed down the lever. - AnteChao4mthCommented
Does it mess with time? If not why does it say, 'temporal' stasis fields?
Creates localized temporal stasis fields, preventing spatial movement or changes to the environment within the field. As long as power is continuously provided to it, nothing will be allowed into, or out of, the locked space without spending more energy than is being provided to the stasis field.] - AnteChao4mthCommentedCh 995 Potential
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Also, maybe, 'Heaven' --》'Heavenly'
Ji Lanfang frowned after hearing this. It's not impossible to do such a thing, but it would require Wang Wei to secretly travel to all 3800 Heaven World Will and cast that curse. However, his intuition as a swordsman told him things were not so simple. - AnteChao4mthCommentedCh 19 Hippogriff