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i agree. why are the thoughts and actions so contradictory and have a lot of flaws. like why don't the mc buy a high grade training manual? why does he pay supreme spirit stone each for the sword and dregs it's so fucking stupid
the arrangements of paragraphs are all over the place. he mentions about something then suddenly mentions other things then back to the first topic. its so confusing. one example of this is the forge. he's just contemplating about companion then suddenly mentions forging .wth
the increase in fan value is obviously because the story is super good. and in my opinion in all of the jujutsu kaisen fanfic i read this has the most consistent and amazing story line. and i hope author-san will continue this story. Thank you so much for the chapter.
this scene is so idiotic. why would a doctor decide to do a crime in a hospital that has a lot of people. shouldn't the scene be like " the doesn't know what to do anymore and out of instinct or something like that he stabs kenji at the heart".
there are too many inconsistencies in this story. like why did he wait a lon time before he killed brian and lily if he can kill them earlier and still be able to retrieved the shadow and healing crystals. its just too idiotic on the mc's part. and his personality of playing with brian and lily is too childish for someone who have been regressed. also why did he suddenly just jumped from level 1 to level three but didn't get an ability for his space ability becoming level he only got an ability for becoming level 3 nothing for level 2. and also it was not explained that the level for the elemental abilities are separated from his own level. like from the time he met Monica's group it was mentioned that he was a level four esper and i thought it includes his spatial ability being level four also. but then i read somewhere around chapter 90 onwards that he just got his spatial ability to level four so it means that there two factors or elements that he needs to level up. first is maybe we can call it his physical body's level and the second one is his elemental powers level and the author clearly didn't explain this two. so it's too confusing
In my experience reading a lot novels especially apocalypse theme almost all the female character in the beginning of the story are those who only rely on the male mc and when they encounter hardship because of the mc they will build up some resentment that causes betrayal so for me i like female characters like sally and i hope she will have more development on her strength and will not betray the mc. thank you for this wonderful story. so far i like the story development and i hope it stays like this
i agree.