Miss_Catastrophe
So far I am in love with the story! Female lead is a strong, independent woman who knows her worth. All the characters are very well written, especially Elaine. She has a goal in mind and her thoughts and actions are very logical and dont feel out of place, which I very appreciate! I also like the fact that female lead's actions directly affect the future and change the how things unfold. The writing style the Author uses is very clear and easy to understand, with just small mistakes or typos here and there, which makes the reading even more enjoyable. Definitely waiting for the Author to continue the story â€
First, this is a reincarnated villainess story which is one of my favorite genres. I love to see how Elaine will escape or handle her fate as the villainess. And since the story has also some goal from the synopsis itself, I know this would grow well. The narratives were also easy to read. I will greatly look forward for more chapters. Overall, this is definitely has an interesting start and would definitely keep this in my collections. Great work author!
Writing quality was pretty good, only a few grammatical errors and could use a bit more descriptive language. A story is all about explaining your imagination in words. To draw in the reader, detailed and understandable descriptions are a must. Character design and story development so far are great! Truly an intriguing mystery that is slowly unfolding. Can't wait to see more, keep up the good work :)