Review Detail of Minxs in Learning the Ways of a Villainess

Writing quality was pretty good, only a few grammatical errors and could use a bit more descriptive language. A story is all about explaining your imagination in words. To draw in the reader, detailed and understandable descriptions are a must. Character design and story development so far are great! Truly an intriguing mystery that is slowly unfolding. Can't wait to see more, keep up the good work :)