Comments of chapter undefined of The Last Blood Elf (Completed)

Can't wait, Can't wait; I want to see him broken like the pest that he is

YES!!! BREAK HIS BONES BOIL HIS BLOOD STRIP HIS MUSCLES FROM HIS BONES PEEL HIS EYES LIKE AN ONION AND BURN HIS SOUL FOR A THOUSAND YEARS!!!

I know that many love this development, but I personally think that this was the worst chapter of this novel. I loved everything up to the previous chapter, but this development of the MC girl being hit is so standard xianxia that I'm kind of tired of it. In addition, in this chapter I realized that the MC has already learned everything that this school had to offer, so given his personality, it makes more sense if he transferred to another one or simply stopped attending the magic school, as he would stay there longer it's just taking risks with no benefit. Even if they break your wand and Luna's wand for leaving school before the OWLs, it wouldn't bother them. I am not saying that this was a bad development, it is just that this fanfic had a lot of potential with several other paths to follow and from my point of view this was the worst one that could have been used. (garbage, meaningless and low quality paths do not count as they could not be used without harming the novel).

expose dumbledore in public and execute in public as well. thank you for the chapter more please

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literally almost every harry potter fanfic, the authors make dumbledore be a bad person...it gets super repetetive, there are literally only 2 fanfics i read that made dumbledore good, but naive, and about 40 that make dumbledore evil, there needs to be more about making him a good guy, its like author is trying to ruin his fanfic by adding way too much bad happening, there is not any part of the fanfic so far that doesnt spell out "okay so now we can have peace for a bit, even a day...", author is literally making every chapter about the atmosphere dark instead of being a mixture...

WHY MUST 95% OF HARRY POTTER FANFICS ALWAYS MAKE DUMBLEDORE AN EVIL PERSON, I HATE IT...

Dumbeldores about to be Chris rocked

Am not liking this at all

there is literally not even a shred of light in this fanfic so far, only darkness...where is the synopsis or tag about #Dark? because there clearly needs one...

HAHA Yes. Kill them all. It's time. Slaughter them. All of them. Inaction deserves death.

Kinda pathetic that a single potion destroyed his secret and they didn't even have protection against it.

Author probably removed her because she was in the way of his developement. I feel betrayed for giving power stones to you!

I just don't understand why that ugly old bastard dumble would do this on school grounds..and to this extent where she is on the verge of death....If she dies in this situation where voldy cunt is out there, he would be in his less favourable situation...so why author San?

Thanks for the chapters

Great Chap, keep up the awesome job 😍