Chapters are 500 words or less.. The English isn't all that great, the formating and editing is also lackluster. Maybe Author should focus on spending more time on each chapters and making them longer and better.
ugh, from someone who's spent a big part of their childhood in that city, I have to say it's not really a nice trip location. Quite dirty.
Luna smiled sweetly before closing her eyes and waving her finger around wildly, Cross moved the map around and Luna poked the map. They both stopped and Cross looked as he said "Canada. Specifically... Montreal. Good choice!"