True Vampires, in all Fiction, are always at least unageing as long as they continue to feed on human blood regularly. There are, of course, variations as many as there are stars in the sky, but the foundation of vampirism is blood and immortality. This has always been the case, at least in every single piece of fiction about vampires that I have ever read. It is a plothole in the Canon Universe. If vampirism worked properly in Canon, everyone able would choose to become a Vampire (at least every rich person, as it would be easy for them to procure human blood en masse). Immortality? And all it takes is a bit of human blood a day or perhaps even only once a week? One would be a fool to not take that chance.

So, is this Harem trash?

Hmm. This has potential even if the english is shaky. I personally don't like the 2 personalities in one body sub-plot, it never reads comfortably. It'd be best to remove this "Naraku" from Great Sage.

I really don't like this Naraku part. Great Sage should be Great Sage until she becomes Raphael. There is no need for this random body-hijacking plot.

Hah, idiot. The only thing you could want is for someone you can see yourself loving to be so wholly in love with yourself that they would destroy the universe for you. There is literally nothing better in terms of romance.

And it really is Apathy that is the true Peak. Love can be found if you allow it to enter your heart. Hate can be all-consuming and comes from the deepest of depths within you. True Apathy is a choice. (Do not confuse it with the base numbness that something like depression could create. True Apathy is more than that. But real Apathy also means that you are soon going to die. Human beings cannot survive when they are empty and have lost the ability to care about their own survival.)

Well, personally, I don't know, but this seems like a deal-breaker kind of thing. Tickling torture is a thing after all. It's not pain, but it sucks energy and resistance and will like not many other things can. There is base pain, then there is things like this, and then there is sensory deprivation for example by making someone lie in a room full of cotton or something and taking away their sight, hearing, taste, smell and touch. Of course, the most interesting torture is emotional torture.

This cultivator's speak is extremely funny when it's so out of place in this universe. Well done.

It's not so bad because it's not done seriously. Some characters will really believe that they are talented. That is when it really gets annoying.

Brothers, sometimes we can admit that another guy is like, cool and handsome, no? I'm not particularly interested in males or girls either way, but we all have eyes. And, it'd be easy to live as a girl if you are pretty enough. Sure, there are different hardships, but we know how simple males ultimately are. If you are pretty enough, you can attract a high-tier male and you'll automatically become a winner in life just by virtue of that. Let's not lie to ourselves here. Of course, if a girl is ugly, life is worse for them than for any ugly guy out there. That's just how society is.

Yes, but actually no. Because it's never JUST strength. It's also aura, personality, atmosphere. Being beautiful or handsome is a side-boon to real strength. You need all of it to become truly extraordinary.

It should help focus your will. And will is important when performing any technique.

Guys, it's actually a good name. They are brothers, showing affection is allowed. From whom else are they going to get it anyway.

But that's simply not true. Compared to humans, you are strong. But there will always be bigger mountains in the Universe. If you have a way to infinitely grow your power, not using it would be a crime against yourself.

You aren't there yet.

These "rants" are not helping anything, just so you know. It just breeds dislike with readers. This story is pretty good. I wouldn't have started when it only had 100 chapters because the chapters are incredibly small for the pace, this is true, regardless of what may be said. At this pace, with this amount of chapters, each chapter should have 3000-5000 words. They don't. This is fine. It's pretty good.

So what if she believes herself right? Her opinions, feelings, her everything, is invalid if you want it to be.

This is the natural progression. Someone will touch your bottom line eventually and you will use your powers to eradicate them, regardless of consequences. That is Will, that is Power. You can choose to be nothing, or to be a Force. Killing, in the end, is not that crazy a thing to do. It is natural. You might be revolted at first, or think it to be immoral, but in the end, these petty feelings will fade. After a few murders, maybe even after the first one, you will no longer consider it to be as devastating as before. It is merely your prior socialization talking, this isn't you, you don't have an innate moral compass. It is taught. If it sticks, wonderful, you are "normal". Of course, this is just how I see things, I'm not an expert on psychology after all.

That does make more sense now. Because the writing really did not reflect his apparent anger issues. He rightfully got angry when provoked and attacked, that is normal. But I can see how this, as described in the story, could happen.

Again, ridiculous. It's just not matching up with what we are being shown. He is hypnotizing himself into believing it to be true.