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Well, using all of the hints you left, I am torn between two options, but I will go with the one I would like to see, especially because he is in Kiri, and that is: Jinbe, I choose you
Ok, so I will read it a few times and change to another novel to relax and them come back. I was serious when I said I would hate to drop this novel kkkkkkkk
Oh, I think I got it, maybe not everything, but at least something of why he can't love them. Mikael is the concept of Freedom, or at least, it is a part of his being. If I understand what Emma is trying to say in this paragraph, is that they have the power to order him around, or even brainwash him in some way (like: I order you to love me). This means that they are, FOREVERMORE, his jailors and keepers, he can never be 100% free. And we also know he HATES brainwashing people. Put that together, and I can see his proplem, he CAN'T love them on a conceptual leval. But again, I can be totally wrong PS: English is not my first language, so sorry for any mistakes
Just so I know, when this BS is going to stop ? Because, not gonna lie, is getting really annoying really fast. This novel has great potential and I would hate to drop it because its angering me more than anything. I read to relax, not the other way around. PS: English is not my first language, so sorry for any mistakes found
Ok, so you are going with the orphan route...
Humm, my drama senses and pessimistic nature are saying his sister is one of this captured elves.... I just hope I am not right.
Ok, so I am going to give a tip because I really like the history and I want it to do well. You just have a chance for character growth here. The mistake of not sending the crowns instead of other ninjas, a lack of caution in general and weak mental fortitude (he was manipulated by his teamate easily) are all problems the MC can work on. If you can show that the MC is better than before (at least in this cases) and not drop his level after the growth for plot reasons, you are one step closer to making a good history, and learning for the future if your objective is being an full time author. Also, thanks for the chapter Obs: English is not my first language, sorry for any mistakes
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