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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing6h
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 81 C81 Rescue Mission (1)
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    I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing1d
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    Why would his soul be extinguished? I don't remember a rule like that and I don't think it's a big secret. Following the theory that the multiverse is infinite it is reasonable that there are worlds identical to books, series and films not because they are fiction but because the multiverse is infinite and therefore there are infinite worlds with infinite possibilities. If you imagine any world at this moment, it is likely that it will exist if the multiverse is infinite.

    (You know, if you added one more piece of information, his soul would have been snuffed out from his body.)
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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing1d
    Replied to DaoistU2r6mR

    it can be a translation problem, sometimes scans in different countries translate names a little differently.

    There is an additional reason that was occupying Koru's mind. His "The Visionary" ability originally came from Yohapach, so would he count as a follower of Leohabach?
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    Sky_Sorvereing1d
    Commented

    And nothing happens at all

    Ch 36 A wild Edwin appears! + "Hello is this FBI?"
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    Son of Satan
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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing1d
    Replied to kikicrmkia

    basically charging for translations. To be honest you were more likely to make some money if you followed the example of all the novel translation sites out there and charged you for extra chapters. The way you are in bulk translating several fanfictions with google translator without even the decency to give credit to the original author and on top of that trying to charge for it kind of ensures that no one with a little brain sponsors you. There is no way for a single person to do a continuous and quality translation of so many fanfics at the same time.

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    Marvel God Level Selection (draft)
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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing1d
    Replied to DaoistMadScientist

    I don't remember that in the novel ... I read most of it so I didn't read the webtoon, but I never got to finish it so it may be that I forgot or didn't get there.

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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing1d
    Commented

    I kind of didn't understand her reaction, does anyone care to explain it to me?

    I felt her tense up when I said Angel and then I watched her wave her wand and her eyes shifted to a yellow with a cat's iris. She just looked into my eyes for a moment before she started making out with me again but this time slower and more sensual.
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    Sky_Sorvereing1d
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    I personally preferred the mc dressed as a druid at hogwarts, wearing the vine cover and all.

    Having gotten everything solved I went shopping. The first place I headed to was actually a store that sold bags, trunks or purses. Heading in I talked with the salesmen to see how big these things can get and so I splurged for a fairly big trunk with a libral use of the Extension Charm, Shrinking Charm, and a Locking Charm keyed to me. Once I had ordered one I set off back to Gringotts cause I was going to need way more than 200 Galleons. Coming back out of Gringotts this time I had 1500 Galleons on me and so I set off to buy more stuff. It took me a couple hours of purchases and looking around before I decided I was done. So far I have ordered a Firebolt broom, a self stirring copper cauldron, 5 pairs of robes with hats, 3 cloaks, various magical tea plants, many herbs I could grow, and the Expanded Trunk.
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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing1d
    Posted

    As a fanfic, I really liked this work and I recommend it to Re: Zero and solo leveling fans, but it doesn't have the quality of an original work like the fanfics at the top of the ranking. The story is relatively fast what I personally see as a good thing in a fanfic, I like it when they are fast because they are the ones that usually come to an end instead of being abandoned in the middle or reaching chapter 800 if there is no glimpse of the end of the story. The flaws of this fanfic are the launch schedule not so good and a little inconsistent and at times the story is not as engaging as it should be. The moments that should be special or dramatic end up being normal like any other because the author does not get too deep in the moment, he just says he "recovered the memories" instead of describing a dramatic moment where there is some flahsback, intense emotions and the MC reacting to new knowledge or things like that. In general I liked the fanfic and intend to continue reading, I personally believe that we shouldn't be too hard when choosing a fanfic to read, but we need to be honest when evaluating it because this is what will help the author to grow. So I must say that this fanfic is not one of the best and the author still has a lot to improve, even though I personally like it.

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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing1d
    Replied to DaoistMadScientist

    his system doesn't have a party command, so there's no way for her to enter the dungeon.

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    Sky_Sorvereing2d
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    perhaps it would have been better to keep the memories together with the class, something like the conflict between the two cheats affecting his memories and the class solving the problem by tuning in more with the system. The way it is is also good, but it was done in a very monotonous way, it would have been better to describe more what the MC felt and what he went through making him recover the memories

    Many things came to my mind! I remembered all of Re: Zero until the beginning of arc number 9 ... (N / A: That he has unlocked his memories in this way may seem forced, but I couldn't find another way to do it. I accept opinions or suggestions to change it if you have any ideas.)
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    Sky_Sorvereing2d
    Commented

    That was a fucking stupid decision. At the very least the MC should have got a knife or something before entering the dungeon. Even a stone would have been better than nothing ...

    I remembered that Sung Jin-Woo couldn't kill his first enemy with blows either, he had to use a sword to kill him but I had nothing like a sword.
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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing2d
    Replied to HattoriDaichi

    I personally believe that it would be good to at least add in the synopsis a warning that the story was rewritten and perhaps a date when it was done, so people are not in danger of giving up reading because of the older revisions.

    Ch 15 Not A Chapter [I'ts important (╯ ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)╯]
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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing2d
    Replied to orkhan_soltanov

    if i'm not mistaken the magic circuits started with solomon when he gave rise to the magus. There are those with Regression to the Age of Gods so it is clear that the magicians of the age of the gods have a different physique but have no way of knowing whether they are magic circuits or not

    I will also be removing how Icarus had magic circuits so it can conform more to Type-Moon canon as I like to have abilities/things conform.
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    Sky_Sorvereing2d
    Commented

    maybe it would be better to have posted the revised story, so you would start without the reviews talking about the previous version. if i didn't look at the name of the chapters i would end up giving up reading without knowing that you basically restarted the novel fixing the problems in it

    Ch 15 Not A Chapter [I'ts important (╯ ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)╯]
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    I'm Subaru from Re:Zero
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    Sky_Sorvereing2d
    Replied to Ihte_xp

    instead of throwing your money in the trash, you might as well try to translate some parts of the fanfic into chinese and google it

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    Sky_Sorvereing2d
    Replied to kikicrmkia

    seeing this answer only makes it clear how the translator is stealing over the work of others and doesn't even care.

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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing2d
    Posted

    I have no problems with people translating fanfics from Chinese, even with bad quality, I don't even have problems with them creating a patreon or something. The problem starts when, in addition to the bad translations, the translator pretends it is his original work.

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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing2d
    Replied to Hassan_Hadi

    F

    So I won't be adding the Yuragi MC.
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  • Sky_Sorvereing
    Sky_Sorvereing2d
    Commented

    I like the idea of the fanfic, but I don't like to see mc joining x-man. I would rather he interacted with them without actually joining the x-man

    Ch 1 Osmosian
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