Thanks for the chapter

Why would his soul be extinguished? I don't remember a rule like that and I don't think it's a big secret. Following the theory that the multiverse is infinite it is reasonable that there are worlds identical to books, series and films not because they are fiction but because the multiverse is infinite and therefore there are infinite worlds with infinite possibilities. If you imagine any world at this moment, it is likely that it will exist if the multiverse is infinite.

it can be a translation problem, sometimes scans in different countries translate names a little differently.

And nothing happens at all

basically charging for translations. To be honest you were more likely to make some money if you followed the example of all the novel translation sites out there and charged you for extra chapters. The way you are in bulk translating several fanfictions with google translator without even the decency to give credit to the original author and on top of that trying to charge for it kind of ensures that no one with a little brain sponsors you. There is no way for a single person to do a continuous and quality translation of so many fanfics at the same time.

I don't remember that in the novel ... I read most of it so I didn't read the webtoon, but I never got to finish it so it may be that I forgot or didn't get there.

I kind of didn't understand her reaction, does anyone care to explain it to me?

I personally preferred the mc dressed as a druid at hogwarts, wearing the vine cover and all.

As a fanfic, I really liked this work and I recommend it to Re: Zero and solo leveling fans, but it doesn't have the quality of an original work like the fanfics at the top of the ranking. The story is relatively fast what I personally see as a good thing in a fanfic, I like it when they are fast because they are the ones that usually come to an end instead of being abandoned in the middle or reaching chapter 800 if there is no glimpse of the end of the story. The flaws of this fanfic are the launch schedule not so good and a little inconsistent and at times the story is not as engaging as it should be. The moments that should be special or dramatic end up being normal like any other because the author does not get too deep in the moment, he just says he "recovered the memories" instead of describing a dramatic moment where there is some flahsback, intense emotions and the MC reacting to new knowledge or things like that. In general I liked the fanfic and intend to continue reading, I personally believe that we shouldn't be too hard when choosing a fanfic to read, but we need to be honest when evaluating it because this is what will help the author to grow. So I must say that this fanfic is not one of the best and the author still has a lot to improve, even though I personally like it.

his system doesn't have a party command, so there's no way for her to enter the dungeon.

perhaps it would have been better to keep the memories together with the class, something like the conflict between the two cheats affecting his memories and the class solving the problem by tuning in more with the system. The way it is is also good, but it was done in a very monotonous way, it would have been better to describe more what the MC felt and what he went through making him recover the memories

That was a fucking stupid decision. At the very least the MC should have got a knife or something before entering the dungeon. Even a stone would have been better than nothing ...

I personally believe that it would be good to at least add in the synopsis a warning that the story was rewritten and perhaps a date when it was done, so people are not in danger of giving up reading because of the older revisions.

if i'm not mistaken the magic circuits started with solomon when he gave rise to the magus. There are those with Regression to the Age of Gods so it is clear that the magicians of the age of the gods have a different physique but have no way of knowing whether they are magic circuits or not

maybe it would be better to have posted the revised story, so you would start without the reviews talking about the previous version. if i didn't look at the name of the chapters i would end up giving up reading without knowing that you basically restarted the novel fixing the problems in it

instead of throwing your money in the trash, you might as well try to translate some parts of the fanfic into chinese and google it

seeing this answer only makes it clear how the translator is stealing over the work of others and doesn't even care.

I have no problems with people translating fanfics from Chinese, even with bad quality, I don't even have problems with them creating a patreon or something. The problem starts when, in addition to the bad translations, the translator pretends it is his original work.

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I like the idea of the fanfic, but I don't like to see mc joining x-man. I would rather he interacted with them without actually joining the x-man