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Wanted Wanters

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le_shounenboi
le_shounenboiAuthorle_shounenboi

Thanks, guys for all the love!!! Please keep reading Wanted Wanters. The story's first arc will conclude soon and we'll be moving onto the next arc which will be even more exciting. New characters, new abilities, and a lot of action.

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le_shounenboi
le_shounenboiAuthorle_shounenboi

So part 1 of the Sweet Revenge Arc has already ended in the story. The second part of this arc will start ten days from now. Please do give it a read. The story has been very merry until now but it's definitely going to get darker. I really want to write the ending of this arc asap but I have to first create a plot for the main antagonist of this arc...what a drag đŸ˜©. Thanks for all the reviews and please continue reading Wanted Wanters.

le_shounenboi
le_shounenboiAuthorle_shounenboi

Since I have my exams coming up this story will be on hiatus indefinitely. Sorry for the inconvenience. For those who haven't read this story please do give it a read and leave me some feedback. Thank you!!!

Alexandra_An
Alexandra_AnLv2Alexandra_An

As somebody already metioned (Jo_J) it is a perfect start! Just follow your dreams! The storyline is interesting and the main character also. Added to my Library. I'm looking forward to reading it.

Lexi_Roberson
Lexi_RobersonLv1Lexi_Roberson

It seems I have already left a review on this book, but I will gladly do it again. This is one of those stories that you can keep coming back to. Still think Dillian is funny and a hilarious man from the very beginning. I have seen that some of the grammar errors have been reduced, I like a nice good flow story. This is definitely one of those. I highly recommend this to other readers!!! I want to mention that this is the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!

Ana_musings
Ana_musingsLv10Ana_musings

If you wanted readers to be spooked after looking at the cover, you did a good job. It is creepy in a good way,lol. Wanted wanters..? The cover and the title make people 'want' to read the book. See what I did there. :) The story is detailed and well written. Good luck.

Gerald_018
Gerald_018Lv1Gerald_018

Reveal spoiler

Ravi_Law13
Ravi_Law13Lv1Ravi_Law13

This story has grown so well, I'm loving it. I see that you have improved on your grammar author great job. Your second story arc is killing it but maybe we could get a little more description of France. You have used con artists really well in your second arc and I really felt sorry for Dillon when you made him propose to all those girls. Keep it up! You are doing a great job!!!

mozza_mello
mozza_melloLv3mozza_mello

This is an enjoyable book! :D I really like the characterization, especially the Demizu guy hehe! <3 Also, the writing is really great! Grammar is perfect, punctuation is also great hehe! Great job, author! <3

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Wow this story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this novel will thrive in the future! Congrats on your work and may your novel be popular in the future! BTW, I am from review swap....

ujjwalanushka34
ujjwalanushka34Lv1ujjwalanushka34

Hi, your story is very interesting. Especially the way you have shown your protagonist's personality. The language of the story is very well written. The description of different scenes is well detailed, but I would as a reader I think you can expand a bit more on some of the scenes.

Gaureeey
GaureeeyLv1Gaureeey

It's definitely a genre i wouldnt read but a genre i'd like in an anime or in a live action because this is amazing. The writing stile is crisp and distinct ! Dillion's character development is so far done at the right pace and most writers usually mix up between characters and their traits especially while dialoguing but this book is f****g amaziiiinggg

takunithecat
takunithecatLv1takunithecat

The beginning reminded me a lot of Bungou Stray Dogs, but it gets really different. For one, the MC is much more powerful. Kind of. The writing has a few grammatical errors, but it isn't anything the average reader wouldn't be able to understand. Updates are consistent and the story is already flowing. The character design and abilities are interesting. There's already a !interesting! dynamic between the MC and his foil, so readers should be on the lookout for that. The world design so far looks fairly logical, but there is still more than enough room for the author to throw in twists. Its a great start!

bishop1275
bishop1275Lv4bishop1275

The story has an interesting plot. The characters were intriguing with their unique abilities. The mystery behind their identities certainly made me read more. The story development is something to look forward to. There was just some issues with the sentence structure, but it could easily be fix with proofreading, so that the flow of the story could move smoothly. Overall, this book has a good potential. Keep updating.

incarnadine
incarnadineLv1incarnadine

nice story so far! as a person who watches anime, I can sort of feel its influence. some grammar errors, and I have trouble understanding Dillon's ability; but an extremely intriguing premise, and can't wait to see where you take this~

Jo_J
Jo_JLv13Jo_J

Perfect start! You have an idea and try to implement it... Dream, chase the dreams, reach them and dream again... as I say to people :) I wish you an inspiration and a lot of great ideas! Merry Christmas! Just think about my comments in your text. I will come back in a few days.

Wolfgirl1215
Wolfgirl1215Lv2Wolfgirl1215

Some good writing here! Good world building and a satisfying amount of background information that really helps to make the story immersive. I really enjoyed the character dynamics, and the scattered humour throughout. Also the writing is very good, the whole story flows nicely which makes it an enjoyable read. My only wish would be that dramatic events or revealtions get a bit more emphasis!

Darkswan
DarkswanLv4Darkswan

a great story the story line and the characters are really interesting , yes the cover is spooky but wonderful you are a talented writer keep up the good wrk

Khawla_Amini
Khawla_AminiLv2Khawla_Amini

I came here just to give it a look, but I'm totally hooked right. 😍 The story is on point - same with the style of writing.. Can't wait to see what's coming next [img=update]

TofSpades
TofSpadesLv3TofSpades

Wanted wanters. I want to read more! The want is killing me. This novel has a great potential to blow up with time and effort. It just needs more chapters!