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So part 1 of the Sweet Revenge Arc has already ended in the story. The second part of this arc will start ten days from now. Please do give it a read. The story has been very merry until now but it's definitely going to get darker. I really want to write the ending of this arc asap but I have to first create a plot for the main antagonist of this arc...what a drag đ©. Thanks for all the reviews and please continue reading Wanted Wanters.
It seems I have already left a review on this book, but I will gladly do it again. This is one of those stories that you can keep coming back to. Still think Dillian is funny and a hilarious man from the very beginning. I have seen that some of the grammar errors have been reduced, I like a nice good flow story. This is definitely one of those. I highly recommend this to other readers!!! I want to mention that this is the user BellsandLexShow from the forum!!!
This story has grown so well, I'm loving it. I see that you have improved on your grammar author great job. Your second story arc is killing it but maybe we could get a little more description of France. You have used con artists really well in your second arc and I really felt sorry for Dillon when you made him propose to all those girls. Keep it up! You are doing a great job!!!
It's definitely a genre i wouldnt read but a genre i'd like in an anime or in a live action because this is amazing. The writing stile is crisp and distinct ! Dillion's character development is so far done at the right pace and most writers usually mix up between characters and their traits especially while dialoguing but this book is f****g amaziiiinggg
The beginning reminded me a lot of Bungou Stray Dogs, but it gets really different. For one, the MC is much more powerful. Kind of. The writing has a few grammatical errors, but it isn't anything the average reader wouldn't be able to understand. Updates are consistent and the story is already flowing. The character design and abilities are interesting. There's already a !interesting! dynamic between the MC and his foil, so readers should be on the lookout for that. The world design so far looks fairly logical, but there is still more than enough room for the author to throw in twists. Its a great start!
The story has an interesting plot. The characters were intriguing with their unique abilities. The mystery behind their identities certainly made me read more. The story development is something to look forward to. There was just some issues with the sentence structure, but it could easily be fix with proofreading, so that the flow of the story could move smoothly. Overall, this book has a good potential. Keep updating.
Some good writing here! Good world building and a satisfying amount of background information that really helps to make the story immersive. I really enjoyed the character dynamics, and the scattered humour throughout. Also the writing is very good, the whole story flows nicely which makes it an enjoyable read. My only wish would be that dramatic events or revealtions get a bit more emphasis!