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This story has grown so well, I'm loving it. I see that you have improved on your grammar author great job. Your second story arc is killing it but maybe we could get a little more description of France. You have used con artists really well in your second arc and I really felt sorry for Dillon when you made him propose to all those girls. Keep it up! You are doing a great job!!!
an emotional ending I like it.
Great chapter love it!!!
This is really amazing.
Although this chapter was smaller I liked it more than the previous one.
It's a good start :)