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diehard tower of god fan; likes kpop, manga, anime, books~ Author of 'Retiring as an Incompetent Queen' https://www.webnovel.com/book/retiring-as-an-incompetent-queen_18875466706564505

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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
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    we just reached 9k views! thank you, as always, for the support (honestly I never imagined we'd get this far)!

    Ch 15 Heading to Vya
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
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    We just reached 8k views! Thank you so much for the support and collections <3

    Ch 14 The Answer: It Remains Unknown
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
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    Are there actually readers out there? Or am I writing into the voiiiiiDddDd~ (just joking, it's nice that you're here!) If you have any questions or observe any plot holes/grammatical errors, feel free to comment and I'll do my best to fix them! woohoo for 6k views!

    Ch 12 To an Escapist, From an Escapist
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Replied to Babybear

    thank you so much!

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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
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    although english isn't your first language, your writing is incredibly good! some errors here and there, but I was pulled into the story from the start; the action scenes were well-written. looking forward to your next updates~

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    Guide on Exorcising Demons
    Fantasy · The_Canary
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Posted

    Lia's a very relatable heroine! Several grammar and spacing errors, but I get the gist of the storyline; most of the explanations are easy to understand too! Looking forward to where you'll take this concept~

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    I'm Not a Saint but Not a Villainess Either
    Fantasy · Babybear
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Replied to Glenstonx

    thank you so much~

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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Replied to phoenixhyperion

    Thank you so much for the feedback~!

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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Posted

    Hi, author, the first thing I loved about this novel was its concept. The strings, interconnecting based on different types of loves, really was incredible. Although there are some grammar mistakes, the concept was fantastic, and the characters were presented nicely. Hats off to you~

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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Posted

    surprisingly, I feel Leon's personality and thoughts relatable, and I think you developed him very well! some errors here and there, but the descriptions and character development were on point, and I'm looking forward to your future updates!

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    Apotheosis.
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Commented

    perhaps 'felt,' instead of 'feels' since it's past tense? :))

    He feels the suffocation due to the huge amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere. Suddenly thrown into confusion, his mind was in a constant state of panic. His eyes were blurry as his eyes were teary due to the pain he was feeling. He saw his left hand bloodied as he touched the side of his head when he was thrown outside through the windscreen of the car due to the force of the collision. Pieces of glass shards was everywhere as he looked around in fear and agony.
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    Apotheosis.
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Posted

    I was only able to read up to the paid ones, but it really tugged at my heartstrings~ the vivid portrayal of grief and family, was incredibly emotional; impeccable writing, really. Just some minor errors here and there, but hats off to you, author!

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    Surrender to Grief
    Urban · Glenstonx
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Posted

    A few grammar errors, but I really enjoyed the story! What with the vivid descriptions, the setting, and the nicely constructed world background, it was an incredibly enjoyable novel~ good luck on your next updates~

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    Multi-Gene
    Sci-fi · Typhlix
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Commented

    There's also Baronet, below baron, but baronets typically have this status of a commoner, and thus, aren't really nobles.

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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Commented

    pronounced 'uh-lev-yar'

    Elevyar.
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
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    To clarify, if anyone gets lost, the Resilian-Elevyarian Woods are the forests that separate Resilia (pronnounced ruh-sil-li-uh) and Elevyar (pronounced uh-lev-yar). The Argent River is in the middle of it, and there is both a Resilian side and an Elevyarian side, which the river separates.

    The Silver Bridge was just one of many Silver Bridges that connected the edge of the Resilian-Elevyarian Woods to the other side, crossing the Argent River that separated the two kingdoms.
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
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    In case there's any confusion: metal is a sub-element of earth, but it's still considered a separate element! The main elements are the usual ones: water, fire, earth, and air.

    It had been allegedly shaped by Metal Manipulation Specialists, the bridge railings shaped with almost painstaking intricacy. Yu Yan pitied the mages who had taken the time to etch hand-drawn floral patterns into the bridge's columns; the silver pillars that merged with the railings wove together to offer a curved shelter-like roof over the bridge-crossers' heads.
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Posted

    The dialogue flows, and the characters are really well-developed! I can tell that Luna's used to being the former queen, and can't adjust to her reality just yet...she's a unique lead that I'm looking forward to reading about~ I'm curious about her fall from grace, though, but I'm sure the author's planning for that in the future! Can't wait for the next updates! Good luck!

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    Luna's Diaries
    Urban · theanneleen
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Posted

    The world background (i.e. the descriptions) are well thought-out, and I enjoyed reading about it; the characters are also pretty developed. As a whole, I would just recommend improving the small errors, as it sometimes affected the flow of the story. But overall nice job!

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    Scar : It's you
    Sci-fi · ujjwalanushka34
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  • incarnadine
    incarnadine3yr
    Posted

    the character design and world background were really amazing! I was pulled along her journey, and the descriptive nature of the story's romance was truly wonderful. a few grammatical errors, but all in all good job!

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    I Dare Not Hope
    Urban · bishop1275
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