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I can't take my eyes off the story...It hooked me deeply...I loved how the author started the beginning...The author's writing style & choice of words are remarkable...I hope the story ends on a happy note...Looking forward to reading more chapters...Highly recommended book...Excellent work, Author!
Beware! If you're a female, you might find yourself falling in love with the male characters in this book. You would start wishing you were the FL with vivid imagination. Yeah it happened to me starting from chapter one. The authors description of the old man with the white hairđđđ„°. I've only read to chapter two but I just had to come write a review before I continue reading... Good job author! You deserve more than the 25 stars đ„đđđ
The consitency of writing, the setting, the character Eleanor actually inspired me to name one of my characters in my book after her hehe but as a babyyy! 23 chapters, have an amazing style of writing and setting, im hooked! T R U L Y. Cheesy romance is something i was never into but this isnt exactly cheesy, its smoothly crafted, I love the prologue ! ^-^ i'll read the last two chapters in a bit!
This story deserves 5 stars based on how beautifully the author has designed the characters and the world background. Reading the story is like reading a poem. The author knows how to play with words and arrange them in the most satisfying manner. Will absolutely recommend this novel to all the fantasy lovers!
Well written story, I love the flow and the characters are well described. I can see a great potential in your story and I look forward to your update. The world building is smooth and does not feel like a massive info dump although I was quite taken aback by the flashback scene where multiple unknown characters were mentioned but it was fine since the focus was the two children anyway. Keep it up, I wish you the best in your work.
This story is of a very high quality. Beautiful prose, flawless dialogue and a cast of rich characters. I have loved the opening to the story. And this author knows how to write romance! Real sense of authenticity. If I tried to write in this way the romance would come off as hokey and weak, but this author nails it. Great reading material so far! Keep up the good work.
Hi author! Your work was great! hats off to you, author! I was amazed at how you used italicized and bold fonts for separating the narration from the thoughts or events in the story. The story itself is quite interesting, hardly find any flaw. I hope you continue updating constantly! Your work has great potential, so keep going! Regards, Glenstonx
Excellent! The descriptions are fascinating, author. You have the ability to bring your words to life by allowing me to easily imagine the world and characters you created, and I, as a reader, am grateful for that. The plot is well-paced and your character design is excellent, I found myself so immersed in the story that I kept reading. Please, keep up the good work, author! Definitely recommended!