Oh my... This cheered me up. Thank you for your nice comment. I'll definitely update soon! There's just something going on right now.. Hopefully it'll be solved soon. Thank you! :)

Thank you very much for your honest feedback. The edits will come soon. Thanks for taking interest with this book :)

Thank you very much for your feedback. Your support is greatly appreciated :)

Thank you very much for your feedback. I'll see to it and change it immediately :)

This is the first thing I read today. I am so grateful for your nice feedback. Thank you! More power to you!

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Thank you very much for taking the time and reviewing my series! It means a lot to me.

My, this is so lovely.

Thank you very nuch for your feedback. I appreciate it very much, dear reader. :)

Well written story, I like how the author describes what was happening. And boy, was I shocked. This story has a lot of interesting parts in it though there were a lot of terms I was unfamiliar with, I was grateful for the glossary part. Also, there were many characters, it was kind of hard for me to memorize but I hope it goes well for Mounika. Keep up the good work. I wish you the best.

Yes. It has come to my attention that I need to put spaces for it not to appear text heavy for mobile users. Rest assured that I have formatted future episodes. Previous episodes will be reformatted soon. I apologize fpr the inconvenience. Thank you very much for taking an intererest to my story. I will be sure to incorporate that element in the future.

Thank you very much for your honest feedback, kind reader.

Thank you very much for your feedback!

Thanks for this! Will edit.

All I can say is, Go, Kai, beat them all up! The story is both interesting and well written. I have seen little to no grammar error and I'm sure that this story has a great future. I want to know more about Kai and his further development. I look forward to more exciting episodes. Keep it up and I wish you the best.

The story is well written and my interest is piqued. It was unique of me to see a story which described all of it's characters from the get go so I have no particular like or dislike about it. The premise is nice and the story as I view it is sad and tragic (I like sad stories). From here, I look forward to where the story would go. And I think it's definitely fine if there was no romance in the story as you have said so since they are indeed siblings and a minor (unless..) Anyways, keep up the good work. I wish you all the best.

Maybe you can change the last sentence to: "No one ever wanted a broken little child in their lives... unless they would like to break it more." So it sounds better? Just a suggestion :)

I did not expect this quote to pop up but I have to admit that made me feel good and wholesome.

Well written story, I love the flow and the characters are well described. I can see a great potential in your story and I look forward to your update. The world building is smooth and does not feel like a massive info dump although I was quite taken aback by the flashback scene where multiple unknown characters were mentioned but it was fine since the focus was the two children anyway. Keep it up, I wish you the best in your work.

I am interested as to how you did this format...