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Hey guysssssssss it's me again. I hope you've all been goooooood and I hope you are all staying safe out there!!!!! I thought of something a couple of days ago and I want all your thoughts on this. I'm thinking of making 'Cloven (Broken) 2'!!!!!! What y'all think???? The story of Ashley and Christian continues. More set backs More fights More lies More breaking moments New enemies and new loses Can the love they have for each other withstand and surpass all? Is their love strong enough? Is it the real cause of their downfall or was it just an highschool fling all along? Stay tuned and find out more in Cloven(Broken)2 So comment away!!!! And let me know if their story should have a part two. Your comments will determine their future!!!!
A great read! I will say, seeing how much problems Trish has in her life and how she is moving forward is really empowering! The only thing i'll give advice on is that you re-read what you had written and edit it so that it is much more clearer to read. If you do that then in no time, you'll have a great book! ^_^ from ryder
Writing Quality: Goop quality. No noticeable error that could affect the flow of the story. 5/5 Updating Stability: Can't complain much about this since. Knowing the intense stress that comes with writing, I commend the author. 5/5 Story Development: The story is about the Ahley, who woke became heaetbroken after catching her boyfriend with someone else. Right from the prologue, the game progresses in a great way. No deviation from the plot. 5/5 Character Design: The characters are well planned out and designed. Especially that of Ashley. Well made. 5/5 World Background: The world is well built. It's based on romance fantasy. Overall: A well written novel. 5/5
I like writing genuine reviews with bits of criticism, so here I am. The only issue is the language, it's not a big issue but some things could be change, best is to avoid he said, she said, he asked and use an action to make that matter when two people talk. Besides that, I enjoyed it very much, the story felt fluid, it was enjoyable to read, the word usage was that of an everyday use so not something beyond comprehension. Tenses in some places were out of place but after getting a little further made more sense, the author is a little quirky and energetic. Correct some commas because there is nothing bad with the story and characters! Even though I am not into romances, this was quite a nice breeze of air.
This novel, usually I don't like the drama and this has some stereotypes but it is a bit close to real life, and its hilarious that I actually have a sister named Ashley and I'm her older brother, all in all this novel is going in my library, good job author gonna expect greater things in your next written work.
Finally done with this book!!!!! I can't believe this book has actually ended!!! I loved the ending although I wished some certain things didn't happen (not to be a spoiler) but this is def one of my best reads. Just need some editing and I'm sure this book will go far. Thanks for this awesome book author!!! can't wait to read your next upcoming books!
It's been a while since I read a story with this kind of genre since my library is piled up by fantasy novels but I like this anyway! It's heartbreaking to see the problems piling up the mc and It's intriguing to know how the female lead and male lead relationship will go through while having her problems. I'll continue reading! Anyway, the novel is nice and good overall that keeps the reader interested as the story goes on. Keep it up author!