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  • docaqui
    docaqui29d
    Commented

    at this point... in time... I think Mackie is Vernon's child rather than Vincent's

    Ch 58 Chapter 58
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  • docaqui
    docaqui29d
    Commented

    vincent's perspective with women started very wrong due to his mother acting like a gold digger.. feel a bit sad for the man but he is beyond saving.. vernon at least is.. can't wait for the chasing chapters.. worth reading i bet

    Ch 61 Chapter 61
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  • docaqui
    docaqui29d
    Commented

    man, u r right chloe.. he is a manchild

    Ch 58 Chapter 58
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  • docaqui
    docaqui29d
    Commented

    my mind went full on auto imagine jungkook's face on this scene

    They were staring at each other for a while. Vernon went silent. With the straw still inside his mouth. He watched in a daze as Chloe silently walked to his table and put the cracker on the table. 
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  • docaqui
    docaqui29d
    Commented

    nah.. izz just u haven't experience it for so long that u start to crave for it

    'Am I actually as perverted as him?' Chloe wondered. 
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  • docaqui
    docaqui29d
    Commented

    since when did you not?

    [Warning: Author uses explicit words in any smut chapters, readers have been warned.]
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  • docaqui
    docaqui29d
    Commented

    lucky Chloe

    "No," Diamond shook her head. "I don't get that kind of luxury as an office facility. But I do get paid a lot, much more than the salary from other companies."
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  • docaqui
    docaqui5mth
    Posted

    Here is my honest review: Writing Quality: 4/5 Reason: There are some punctuations that were not supposed to be there, and some were missing. Especially commas and periods. Some parts of the narration were awkward, but there is still a room for improvement. Stability of UDs: 5/5 Reason: I could see the author has much time to update the novel and for me, that is outstanding. The story itself is intriguing and the updates r helping with the curiosity of every chapter. Story Development: 5/5 Reason: It's slow for my liking. But it's aight. Character Design: 4/5 Reason: It was not clear to me who the characters were. I just know a bit of info from the synopsis, but not much in the novel itself. World Background: 4/5 Reason: It's not as clear as day, but it could be managed by reading it thoroughly. Overall: 4.4/5 Reason: I love reading chaps out loud and some parts of the chaps that I've read already were a bit...yk, I feel out of breath. The novel is intriguing and hella cool. But I just feel that the author needs to look out for his/her punctuations to improve the quality of the chapters. Keep up the good work and wish you all the best.

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  • docaqui
    docaqui6mth
    Posted

    I've only read the first chapter but it already gave an interesting and promising start. The world background is still a bit vague but the author already did a great job on giving a character bg. Great work!

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  • docaqui
    docaqui6mth
    Replied to Josh_Ward_0255

    thank you for reading and enjoying the book! love lots

    Ch 271 Is this the End? [Alternative Ending]
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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Posted

    I've only read the first chapter but it already gave an interesting and promising start. The world background is still a bit vague but the author already did a great job on giving a character bg. Great work!

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    War&Military · SighingClouds
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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Commented

    Evil yet charming.. me likey likey likey

    Ch 6 I'm Making FRIENDS
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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Commented

    gnash them more until they fall off, that way nothing will be broken once the ball hits yer face

    While Antonette got glued there, shocked and gnashing her teeth in wrath.
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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Commented

    sounds like someone I know.. hehe

    Those masculine tanned 2D men, that made her heart pound whenever she's playing. Her shoulders shrugged. 'Too bad. I got transmigrated in my own novel, not inside those games. huhuhu'
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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Commented

    next chapter.. where?

    Ch 5 Revenge For The Errand Girl II
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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Commented

    dude.. if u did, then u r not the only one

    "Is this a sign?..to hate physics?" she mumbled.
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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Commented

    YOOOOOOOOOO

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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Commented

    yooooo HAHAHAHAHHA wtf

    From the desk where she was supposed to be, two female students were waiting for her. One with blonde hair, thick red lipstick and blush-on. Nevermind the other one, since she didn't write any details about her.
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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Commented

    *sips tea at the corner*

    Ch 2 The Decree Of KARMA
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  • docaqui
    docaqui7mth
    Commented

    yo, dun be too flustered

    "Young Miss! Please don't be like that!" Benson exclaimed again.
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