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A beautifully written romance novel. It's still in its early days but it's promising. Not to many errors in the grammar that could affect the flow if the story. The story line is good as well as the character's development. So far, it's being great.
Early, but great work. The transition from urban to classic fantasy was beautiful. A few grammatical errors, but nothing major so far. The world building is great as well as the characters. Great work.
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The Style: The author is a minimalist. The sentences are short, direct and beautifully composed. The author is also using the first person central narration. It fitted well with the story. 5/5. The Story: It's about a girl, Katie, who had to endure the most difficult of life journeys. Rght from the synopsis, the story captivates. And when one start reading, it will be impossible to drop. 5/5. The Grammar: High quality. No major error that affects the flow of the story. 5/5. The Characters: They're well designed and thought out. Katie, the MC, is a beautiful character. Other side characters are well planned too. This shows the ability of the author. 5/5. Overall: Great book. Recommended.