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The style: The author is using the omniscient third person narration style from from two different angles of immortal and mortal lives. The readers are able to experience the thoughts and emotions of the character's of the world of monsters, and see the world through the perspectives of the various characters. The beautiful switches of perspectives showed the narrative capacity of the author. Greatly done. The story: It followed the tales of two main characters. One is a sorceress who died in her previous life and was later reincarnated by the Eternals as a monster -vermin. Despite its negligible lifespan, it continued to struggle against its fate. The second is a boy named Kiran who left his home to defy fate. With a name of hope, he seeks a class which hundreds have failed in their search of. A uniquely beautiful story that keeps on developing without deviating from the plotline. The grammar: High quality grammar. No noticeable errors that could affect the flow of the story. This is highly commendable. The character: This is one of the strongest area of the story. The author is able to invent simple but complicated characters that are highly relatable. The characters of the reincarnated vermin and Keiran are absolute joy to read. They are well written and defined. Not everyday you see writer's get it right with characters, especially the non-human ones. Well done, author. Keep up the great work.
This story is still at the early stages, so there's not much to go with in regards to story development, the characters and world background. Nonetheless, the author has made a clear direction known through the book's synopsis. I hope the book progresses accordingly. Looking forward to seeing the characters development too. Great work, author. Keep up the good work
Honestly among all of the Original novel there is hardly anything good in them. But this novel is truly good, not only the story that is great, the character design is very good. Even spelling and grammar also nearly perfect and we can very very few mistakes in these two areas. The worldbuilding is also on point Novel is nearly as good as translated novels. Story has great potential and if Author put time on it it'll become one of the best Novels. So our good fellow brothers and sisters, read this novel and support the author.