Reviews of Hybrid’s Revelation

Author here! I apologize for doing this, but I joined KDP Select and can only show 10% of book one. Chapters 5-46 are gone. If you want to read them, my book is only $1.99 on Amazon. Chapters 1-4 of book one is here while Chapters 47-? of book two are still here and available. Once again, I am sorry, and please understand why I did this. Thank you for all your support!

Well built world with great character! Nice grammer and vocab and also smooth feeling while reading, so ith has great potential! Keep up the good work!

Well written and quality writing. The story development and character design is good. Having a non-human MC is quite refreshing as well. Everything seems to be creative and the length of the chapters justifies about the information that the author is trying to convey, us the readers! Without much being said, the story is good. I recommend it, maybe in the future I will read more chapters to understand more of this interesting story. Thank you for reading my review! -The TradeMaker

The story is very well written. The character build is excellent. The characters and the story line blends well. I'm eager to read more. Please update soon

I love the premise. A forbidden love's fruit is sent to another world. The writing quality is great, characters are all relatable, especially the children, and the world background is slowly being expanded, but I love that for now Endru is focused on keeping his family safe.

Very interesting concept and it's quite refreshing to read considering that there's only so much info you can cram per chapter. This is a wonderful time to pass the time and it's definitely worth reading.

I was hooked by just the synopsis lol and honestly the way you built the world the story is set is was done really well. I am hoping I can get to that level sometime. Your characters seem really interesting too. Good job all the way!

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Good novel man, you're a pro. I get that ur American? or are you not but an English teacher? The grammar is on point and punctuations aren't wrong unlike mine hahaha. It's a good story but I find the world (environment) and characters hard to imagine as I don't know how they look like. But you know, that's just me man, I tend to read books who describe their characters on how/what they look like. KUDOS! will read new updates soon.

The action scenes in this story are intense and gripping, so if that's what floats your boat, I'd definitely recommend this piece. The descriptions of the story's settings and characters are good, but they could be more detailed!! There are other parts of the story that could also use more elaboration, for example where did the MC get all their knowledge from? Besides those minor issues, this story is headed in a positive direction ^u^

The story is very captivating, as well as the world building is immense within the first few chapters. You can really visualize the world the author is trying to make. The writing and story flow is authentic and keeps your on your toes as you read from chapter to chaper. Good work author!

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Well written and quality writing. The story development and character design is good. The non-human mc brings a unique feel to the story. Good luck and keep writing.

The quality and structure is very good. The story development as well as character development is just as good. The unique MC gives me a new taste and has me interested in future developments. Overall, a good story so far. As the novel progresses, I will most assuredly read more.

So far so good! Well written novel! Carry on writing please! I can't wait to read more of it.

Sounds like Eragon! Love this kind of stories :D More please Hoping you could also drop an initial review for my new novel. Its title is Isekai Institute. Thank you!

This is beyond amazing 👏 I highly recommend this to anyone and everyone who is looking for something interesting and catching to read 😊 I find nor have any fault.... amazingly good 🤗🤗

Your story is well written, nd the characters are well introduced. There are many elements in the story which come as a surprise to me. I wish you the best in your book, good luck!

Overall, a very strong story! I'm only around chapter 12 at the moment, but I enjoy the world-building so far. There are a few clerical errors that stand out, but they can be easily overlooked in favor of the detailed storytelling! Endru seems like a unique MC, and I wonder how his powers will grow with time. All things said, great work, and I look forward to seeing more in the future!

There were 46 chapters when I made this review. I was originally planning on just giving it a try, with the intention of looking for something different, but once I began, I could not really stop again. Time flashed by, and I had suddenly caught up. I really like this story! The writing had me immersed, and the characters were very likeable. I am not going to spoil anything, but the plot was intriguing and I really liked the pace. I would definitely suggest everyone who are considering it to try it, the book is worth a try. I have added it to my library!