Review Detail of RamdevGC in Hybrid’s Revelation
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Good novel man, you're a pro. I get that ur American? or are you not but an English teacher? The grammar is on point and punctuations aren't wrong unlike mine hahaha. It's a good story but I find the world (environment) and characters hard to imagine as I don't know how they look like. But you know, that's just me man, I tend to read books who describe their characters on how/what they look like. KUDOS! will read new updates soon.
Hybrid’s Revelation
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Im not an English teacher but it was always my best subject. Then for teo years I tutored and mentor middle and highschool students in ELA(English language arts). I am a descriptive person in stories but I wanted to write a book based on more action than description. Is that bad? Should I be descriptive more?
RJMidnight:Im not an English teacher but it was always my best subject. Then for teo years I tutored and mentor middle and highschool students in ELA(English language arts). I am a descriptive person in stories but I wanted to write a book based on more action than description. Is that bad? Should I be descriptive more?