I'm a newbie to this platform but I have read a lot of novels to have a fresh view point.I have an interest in historical fiction.
The story is well written and the character blend well with the story line. The flow of the story makes it interesting to read as well. I've read a few chapters for now but I will definitely read more. Well done !!!!
The author was able to build the characters well and inject it to align with the storyline. The story flows smoothly. It was very interesting to read. I'm looking forward to read the rest as well. Keep up the good work
It could be clearly seen that the writer was able to successfully mold the characters and the story line. The story telling style is quite impressive and it is very engaging as well. Keep up the good work
The overall writing style is interesting . The writer has built the characters well and even connected the story well. keep up the good work. waiting for more chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is very well written. The character build is excellent. The characters and the story line blends well. I'm eager to read more. Please update soon
This story is so well written. The characters are well described even in the early chapters making it interesting for the reader. The Quality of the writing is really good as well. Keep up the good work :)
Thank you for the beautiful comment. I'll keep you advice in mind when writing the next chapter.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I feel that since the chapter 1 , the author was able to give a good character build and it ultimately positively affected the story line. The story is very interesting. Keep up the good work
I'm still in chapter 3, but I can feel that the author has put alot of effort into the character build and it blends well with story line as well. Keep up the good work :)
I'm still in chapter 3 but I can say that the author has been able to bring out the characters in an intriguing manner. It's interesting to see how the characters are going to unfold in the future
I feel that the author has done some great work with the character build. I'm still in chapter 5 but I am eager to read the rest of the work soon.