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Reviews of New plan

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New plan

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coni334
coni334Lv1coni334

I love this novel ,it has a very nice story background and I also enjoyed the characters . I also enjoyed how the story is funny ,well keep it up author

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Dravio
DravioLv1Dravio

The concept is great and i would definitely recommend this to all the readers out there. Keep up the good work author!!!

BLOOPINGBLOOPER
BLOOPINGBLOOPERLv1BLOOPINGBLOOPER

lovely book here. really had a lot of fun with such welly developed characters. good job making the story easy to follow and generally intriguing!

Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4Drapetomaniac12

I'm speechless. I don't think I can do justice to your work by reviewing it but I'll give it a try. You can get published. You're that good. I would buy your book and love to have it!!! Easy English? ✔️ Original Content? ✔️ Mystery? ✔️ Romance? ✔️ Your novel holds the attention of the readers from the start. I love it so much. I'll surely read everytime you update. It's added to my library. I'll even vote from time to time. All the best!

Readoholic
ReadoholicLv10Readoholic

To be honest i too want Magi-phone.... this novel has completely new concept.. Loving it so far. Very well written and stable updates. Keep up the good work...

bibiyenini
bibiyeniniLv3bibiyenini

The novel is really unique! Imagine the demon king having an app, haha the laughter I got! It's so good, gotta add this to my recommendations list💕

Mikanarhiz
MikanarhizLv2Mikanarhiz

Nice story... Cool idea and story plot. Recommended to read and looking forward for more chapters ❤️❤️ please keep on writing Author-san 😊😍

SaberFate
SaberFateLv2SaberFate

It is a great novel about system that makes himself like a king of demons. The author has a fluent use of language and has a great story plot. Furthermore it is continuously updated regularly, added to my collection!

winterdaisy55
winterdaisy55Lv3winterdaisy55

Nice story! The plot is very unique as i have never read anything like this before! It is a very well thought story. Keep going author! Best of luck.

MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChickenLv3MokouFriedChicken

Interesting. The concept is fairly novel, and it's clear that the author has a plan for the story. There's some grammatical hiccups here and there, but it doesn't take away from the story. Overall, a good read. Would recommend. Keep on writing👍

Hesreth
HesrethLv10Hesreth

Cool concept! Using phones for magic is something I haven't seen before! Keep it up! There's some grammatical and pacing issues throughout the portion of the story that I read though. There were some issues with tenses in the prologue. And the fact that you switch between first and third person does not flow very well, even if you add the separators between when you switch them up. Overall, just keep experimenting and developing this concept. Your writing will grow as you grow and it will grow faster as you write. Keep it up! I'm excited to see what you can do in the future!

GloriouslyFamous
GloriouslyFamousLv3GloriouslyFamous

Well done! The story is written clearly and with a lot of descriptions and detailed writing, making it an immersive experience. The plot of the story is very interesting and the prologue help as a suspense builder, making me want to read more of the story. The concept is great, the characters are dynamic, and the grammar is good. It is a great read, Well done!

myona_
myona_Lv11myona_

The world-building is well done and seems like it was well thought out. So far, it's been really interesting! I'd love to see more chapters! :) The only thing I noted is that present tense and past tense seem to be used at the same time, but other than that, it's great!