Reviews of DISCONTINUEDXZ

I found this positively gripping, from the impressive fight scenes to the smooth dialogue. I felt like I could see through their vision and touch what they could feel. A save to my ever growing library. Even though I spotted a few missing commas, I was surprised to learn I didn’t find myself thrown out of the immersion. Hence, why 5 stars for writing quality ! The MC is a well-designed character with a temper to boot, but her boldness and tenacity is what made me truly like her. Nothing to say about the plot as it is unique ! Please continue this, your 4 years of hard work has payed off immensely, and I hope to see this gem of a novel become famous !

Hmmm novel cover is pretty. Really digging the idea of dreams. Not sure if I'm particularly interested in where the novel is going. Feels like 1 long prologue so far.

After reading a few chapters, I can confidently say that you know how to write. Besides, you pay attention to the language. You don't struggle, like most of us, not English speakers, with tenses, style or grammar. It's your advantage over the rest, use it well! The plot is addictive, the characters are expressive. Everything is in place. You're doing a great job.

I shall proudly say without shame that this is an amazing book thus far. If you are reading this review and are looking for a book with gripping scenes which nicely establishes tension, then give this a read. Author, DO NOT GIVE UP ON THIS BOOK. Even when it seems like it is failing just keep at it. It just needs recognition. The writing quality is hot, descriptions and scenes are extremely vivid and the development of the story is legit. I'm your first collection so far and I intend to stay a collection so continue with your work. Great job and good luck with the rest. You shall find me in your comments every now and then.💯💯

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