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HighPieLies

HighPieLies

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Hello, I really love pies. Especially the special ones :)

2020-12-18 JoinedGlobal
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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Replied to Prince_nonchalant

    I feel like the cover doesn't work well on web novel, maybe you need something flashier?

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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Posted

    Hmmm novel cover is pretty. Really digging the idea of dreams. Not sure if I'm particularly interested in where the novel is going. Feels like 1 long prologue so far.

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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
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    imposter

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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
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    I don't see any problem.

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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
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    Nice writing!

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    HighPieLies3yr
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    did rip.

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    HighPieLies3yr
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    Music makes you lose control

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    HighPieLies3yr
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    love me, love me, say that you love me,

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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Commented

    And I was like baby baby baby ohhh

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    HighPieLies3yr
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    ripp

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    HighPieLies3yr
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    lies

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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Posted

    I feel like some parts could be written better. I think the cover will probably not draw in as much readers. Overall, it's a good novel, looking forward to more!

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    Horror · Prince_nonchalant
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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Commented

    rip

    Apollo smiled, excitement obviously making itself known within him. "Fascinating choice! Fine then, I shall let you stay with the humans but all other Apocrypha shall know of your betrayal. Your head shall be hunted just like the rest of these humans."
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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Commented

    Oh heck no

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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Posted

    The cover was what drew me in! It's really cool, like a galaxy or something. Really nice. This third rate web novel... that line was great. Looking forward for more!

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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Commented

    Caught up to the newest chapter, hmmm, Honestly, I liked this third-rate web novel.

    Ch 1 Was All I Sought
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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Commented

    no fourth wall :0

    The audience watched him like he couldn't see any of them, but there wasn't a wall. Entrapped between three walls, but there was no enclosing wall. The wall that wasn't there meant so much. If something had partitioned the front off, his audience wouldn't have been able to look in and he wouldn't have been able to look out. Just a simple verity that got swept under chants and cheers.
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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Commented

    a hecking poem my guy

    But he didn't care.
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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Commented

    what

    That was part of the explanation, but the reason she wanted him to wear it was a lot more than mere sentiment. Sentiment only kept her here, but love for him kept her near. Him was who, but who didn't know him. And he didn't know either but had assumed it was bitterness. She stayed here because she loved him, not him.
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  • HighPieLies
    HighPieLies3yr
    Commented

    I am so confused.

    He was telling the truth. An actuality.
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