Review Detail of Jo_J in DISCONTINUEDXZ

After reading a few chapters, I can confidently say that you know how to write. Besides, you pay attention to the language. You don't struggle, like most of us, not English speakers, with tenses, style or grammar. It's your advantage over the rest, use it well! The plot is addictive, the characters are expressive. Everything is in place. You're doing a great job.