Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: The Holy Empire

Well I suppose god said 3 wishes and he sure wasnt holding back

With that first wish alone I can already tell that there will be no depth to your story, no suspense or expectations. You might as well have said: "I God now, job done!" and saved us readers the few minutes we've wasted reading till this point. I'll read 5 more chapters to see if I'm wrong (it's unlikely, but possible).

First wish was too bloated with extra things that shouldn't have been possible to add and second wish was totally useless because he didn't get a seamless affinity or a dual mastery but just "I can do it" instead of actually getting ways to have it already done and powered up, but w/e I guess they balance each other out. The third wish was also kind of wasted as this is a level of power achievable by other means but I guess the author wants to keep the story into the star wars canon so adding powers from other fantasies would have broken conventions too much.. which is what I look forward to in this kind of stories so some promising stuff but a tad more worrying stuff on the other side as far as I'm concerned.

i hate this kind of chapter. God will know what you would want, so why waste time meeting you. just send him with a system to a new world and let him figure it out by himself

MC is a dunce. "omg my favorite is SWTOR and Revan" then choses to be born in 32 BBY.

Ughh..... I had high hopes but you just had to go with system that does everything for mc, like always -.- Not to mention also having "wishes" that are actually many wishes in one. Just so much cringe.... Why do so many authors do this??? I mean come on... I really hate the system part, but you could count the first one as one wish if you are super mega loose with the term. But last one is so clearly two wishes that there's just no question about it. First wish is still so broken that it's not even funny. This is total bs. I mean why the heck would you even read this when mc is already 100% guaranteed to take over galaxy with no effort. Just make that bitch system do everything for you. Summon some armies, summon harem, summon buildings and items. I mean gtfo. There's absolutely no empire or harem building here when he can just get them from system.

Author misinterpreted what the three wishes thing was supposed to do. The 'Three Wishes' mechanic is there to make the MC attempt to create a winning combination of abilities with which to be OP. Such as 'I wish to have a million times more midichlorians than Anakin Skywalker' but NOT 'I wish to have a million times more midichlorians than Anakin Skywalker, and I want to be more handsome because of it also I want to be a God and then.. etc' It entirely defeats the point of having limited wishes in the first place if you build upon your wish infinitely like you're doing here.

So not sure if you know. In the books LUke went dark after The “6th” movie/book. He learned that there was no dark or light side. It was just the force. You could love hate and feel all emotions and not be a dark side jedi. Just an fyi. In the books. Chewy died Saving Hans kids.

thanks for the chapter. please keep writing.

Harem It's not Harold, d*** Google Voice recognition doesn't work.

I'm gonna read a little more but when you said like raven, I figured he's gonna be a little dark. No, he's apt to save the universe, just like any light cider, I'm sorry that just don't click with me. I was hoping when you said Harold and Star Wars maybe you would have him actually catch a few of the bad girls and spank them. Why doesn't anybody do that, be a barbarian? I want a Conan.

The wording of the wishes really needs work, it comes out like he made way more than 3 wishes lol

Reading.

40k troops baby

so no toddler age?

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Thanks for the chapter