More and more of a candidate for "best fanfiction of all times" with each additional superb chapter.

I guess I won't be satisfied by this side development until he actually sits down on a PC to verify what's missing from the history of music and records a compilation of greatest hits under his name.

Having such a nice roommate in Hollywood is almost more unrealistic than his reincarnation.

In this universe yes, they sure like to patrol made up cities rather than actual ones..

So Harley that actually started the whole thing didn't get to take a proper taste? I would have never seen that coming! What a plot twist! o.o (and a great chapter to boot ofc ;))

Again with unnecessary real World references that just pull you out of the story, way to sour a mood.

Bro, since when energy drinks give actual power!? The way you worded this, I was 1000% sure he was just gonna get some restorative drink on a lower level of a dragon ball senzu bean, not a power up!

What a glorious and more than welcome return! I had lost all hopes to ever read more of this wonderful work and I'm ever so glad to have been proven wrong! ^_^

Close enough.

Shouldn't he have asked this question BEFORE going on a robbery so that he could immediately store the loot in there on the spot!? -_-"

Probably the least useful of them all? All others can provide means of survival, mobility or being more stealthy in combat at the very least -_-"

I hate people that want to go back with a passion, this guy just lost all my sympathy.

No D.? Time to reroll xD

Why would you make the initial rewards consumables on the off chance that the MC is a complete moron and hands them over to someone else instead of using them for himself? Just don't, save this wording for future rewards when he is already strong enough that handing down such things to his crew wouldn't feel insane, that's basic fanfic common sense..

Well, the headshot surely messed with his language properties..

If you didn't use Lightning and destroyed twice back to back the somewhat between epic and poetic style of narration that you tried to use would have worked (at least, for the most part), but those 2 repetitions completely ruined the mood. I strongly suggest an edit or repost with different words in their place.

That is actually the most logical explanation ever given regarding Enel's ears and'll gladly embrace it.

The third hokage and Danzo should be crucified on the pillar of shame in each and every fanfic, the fact that this MC is so chill about their deeds and even restrains his subordinates from going to give them the lesson they deserve is mind blowing and utterly wrong on all levels.

Why are they not going scorched earth on these sand losers is beyond me.

Nah man I'm out. You went from one extreme to the other, first you wrote many "inner voice"books where the MC was always oblivious to the girls hearing his thoughts and it was the most annoying thing ever, now you finally have an MC who plays smart and knows what he is doing, but you immediately go above and beyond in abusing it, even going as far as saying things that are deliberately made up to deceive a girl (looking for a missing cat despite Kuroka/Lala/Asia awareness) without caring that other girls in his own harem can debunk the BS he is saying and most likely deduce that he is taking advantage of them in the process? Don't you see how being that stupid makes the entire premise of the book crumble? You really have no middle ground. Also, obviously the MC is supposed to have a very large harem, but this is not the way to approach it at all, every girl should be given the proper time and context, this jumbled mess of girls throwing themselves at him, even servicing him with their mouth first (before even kissing) and in a group setting is simply devoid of any tact and class. It's truly a shame because compared to your previous works (which fell into even worse writing pits from far earlier points) this was by far the most promising and the one I managed to read for the longest before getting overly annoyed with it.