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They used the author's name for that character.The author wrote her books in like the fifties and sixties
Oh, come on, really. She is prime.
Okay, here's a point. I'd like to make. I do like the story so I don't want anybody thinking. I'm trashing on it, but from a logical viewpoint. Which is better to have someone who has nowhere else to go out of a forced sense of loyalty serve you or someone who is grateful Serve you with a true sense of loyally. If he saved the village, they would be grateful and they would serve him out of a sense of true loyalty. As it is It's kind of forced and it was forced in the original too. That's why I like it when they actually change Canon. The story really hasn't changed Canon. Much other than removing the main character and exchange for another one, it's having a little work around, but it's still sticking to cannon.
Why not get Kamijo's version. Devil hand fits the character better than a weapon that a can break or be stolen. If you soulbind it to avoid that then mite as well have it as a physical ability.
Seriously, she would not even know what dating was. They didn't date in the time period she's from they would be courting her and if she had a family it would be in the family home or near the family home, it would be a picnic and somebody would be watching constantly. The idea of modern dating in this time period Is ludicrous. I read these stories to escape reality. I don't expect elements of modern society to be brought into the stories, except in like combat and stuff like that. It breaks the emersion every time someone brings a modern idea into it.
I like this story. I really do, but including yet another power is unnecessary. There is enough powerful creatures in this world that it was unnecessary for one of the other elder gods to become involved. It just adds a layer of intrigue. That's unnecessary, seriously all the plotting and lying and waiting in the shadows just doesn't appeal to me. This is just my opinion, no one has to do anything about it. It's just, I find those stories to be unnecessarily cumbersome and convoluted. And if you include upcoming angel war and all the plotting that went on during that it becomes monotonous whenever things about plotting an intrigue. Unnecessary is my new favorite word of the day.
Remember the movie Michael? John Travolta's character smelt like baked bread or cookies or whatever the woman's favorite food was when he walked past them.
"GOLEM!! My Precious....golem"
Yeah, I like that 1 I also like to Uzumaki if it comes with the adamantine sealing chains. Some people say that only works on chakra power that's incorrect if you read the lite novels.
I'm glad this author isn't using the stat page reprint with little change every chapter just to run up the word count. That happens so often in fan fictions. When I started reading 1 or 2 of the stories and I realized they're putting word count at the bottom of the page or chapter. That they're using the stat page as a page filler. I wouldn't mind it so much.If it's just like every five chapters but in some of the fan fictions they're putting it every chapter or every other chapter. It's just monotonous.
When and where did he get ingredients? It was never said he collected them. Maybe I missed that.
Of course, she's a goddess, so narcissistic much.
If you're going to summon a humaniod retainer, I have 2 prime choices the. MC u's Gamora or the Black Widow just before they go split, so they know you saved them from dying. And just imagine how powerful they could be with the system from this world.
Truthfully, if you're going to save the goblin village, why wouldn't you save the ogre village? I mean, really, they're goblins. How are they more powerful than the ogres? If you want to conquer the world, save the ogre village.
Rescue the ogre village that should be a major achievement. I don't understand why other authors haven't done that very often. Because having the entire village is a forced multiplier. I like Benimaru and his group, but they're more General like not foot soldier like.
Oh my God, another one that reprints the entire stat page. When 90% of it didn't even change, this has become a trope in fan fictions. It runs up the word count, it's page failure. I hope it doesn't happen more than every 5 chapters. And then only when a lot of it changes because otherwise it's just info dumping. And soon after excessive dumping we'll be up to our chins in info, it will get really smelly.
Seriously. I see why some of these fan fictions get dropped and rapidly finished. You cannot take the character that is the Essence of the story out of the story. Reincarnated as a slime without the slime is not reincarnated as a slime. Overall without the overlord is not a fan fiction of the overlord It's a fan fiction of the world the overlord was in. So this is in the world of reincarnative as a slime. I would still have the original MC but for a mentoring relationship with them or use them as an administrator.
3 choices, one black ribbon, like the original 2 round glasses like Alucard's or Vash,s and 3 of cyber punk visor style, sunglass would be cool.
I hope this character can adapt to the transition between modern society and a feudal society. Because that's what got Rimaru In trouble in the original series. Was he thinking like a modern Japanese guy? When there are people literally raping and murdering each other just down the road and it's considered normal.
It's only been in the last 200 years of the 200,000 years that modern man has existed. According to the geological record, the harems are frowned upon. Before that, if you had power and could afford a harem, you weren't just encouraged to have one, it was expected to have 1.