LongSongGolden
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LongSongGolden4hCommentedBy hiding his face, Allen Walker became a discreet guy with no special features. 'I wonder if that's how Superman's glasses work? No matter, I'm ready to go to school again.' Allen sighed; another day in that survival prison called school.- LongSongGolden6hCommented
....those are library books he just burned right???
"I still don't understand how she found this place and got here... Anyway... these books, not knowing the language of the north is a curse..." Madara thought to himself before setting those books on fire and lying down on the cover to sleep. - LongSongGolden6hCommented
Honestly the whole story is sorta branching out in a lot of different directions without any clear "main" branch at this point, so it's just getting hard to tell what is actually important and what's considered a side story (and that may be intentional, idk). Like obviously the MC is still the focus, but you have Dumbledore plotting, Grindelwald plotting, Hermione being a backstabber/mind controlled with the Dept of Mysteries, You have Lily and her gang, you have the MC and the Black family, then there's still Voldemort and his cronies. On top of all that you still have Umbridge, toadies in the ministry and the ICW all with their own plots. There's a lot of different stories that have been setup.
AN: Not sure about how I built up the Department of Mysteries and Lily's connection to it. I'll be honest here and say that I'm kinda conflicted about it. Also, as for why Lily hadn't done more damage to the department, she could have, easily in fact, but this is part of a larger plan. As usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any recommendations. - LongSongGolden6hCommentedYou thought it was only one chapter, but no it was three!
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Prothean*
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Javik*
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glass cup* ("cup of glass" would usually be interpreted as a cup full of glass) or cup made of glass*
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tool*
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Yeah! teach her a lesson lol.
"Just one whisper and the little shit will learn her place" Minthara mumbles to herself, though loudly enough for Marco to hear her. - LongSongGolden1dCommented
Gotta get with a better crowd there Mark. Other governments aren't so stingy, they don't really care how much things cost.
Cecil blinked, seeing the dozens of empty plates flooding the nearby tables and the owner crying in a corner. Then he looked back at Invincible. - LongSongGolden2dCommented"Should I be able to create a living castle?" He wondered. He thought that if he could, he would be the first to do something like that, even his ancestors hadn't thought of it.
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wand core*
Honestly, he loved his customized wand, which was why he didn't go to Ollivander. The old British wandmaker would refuse to use a wand so far outside his guidelines. - LongSongGolden2dCommented
British spelling of the colour is "Grey", unless his actual name is just Gray then that's fine.
Edward Gray simply nodded and replied, "It's the least we can do while you're risking your life, Agent Black." - LongSongGolden2dCommented
odd to go for silver and emerald green, then change it up for the broach with gold and ruby. It won't look horrible but it's going to buy a lot of focus on the neck given that it's the only part that sticks out like a sore thumb.
On the night of the Masquerade Ball, Asterion stood before the full-length mirror, clad in an elegant dark green suit adorned with delicate silver lines resembling the thorns of a rose, scattered across the chest area and sleeves of the jacket. A white scarf wrapped around his neck served as a tie, fastened by a dazzling ruby-studded golden brooch. - LongSongGolden2dReplied to JONTY_
yep, it just gets really awkward when you have the MCs partners ditching him of go do their own thing.
Author's Thoughts: Political movements! Alias was told that there will be two female protagonists that is: Man-Woman-Woman. It will contain Yuri, in case you are in doubt. - LongSongGolden2dCommented
wouldn't it be termination? or is it supposed to be that the minister would force him to resign instead of outright firing him?
If he dared to arrest either of the two, perhaps on the same day, he would receive his letter of resignation. Arcturus Black was the Leader of the Pure-Blood Faction, controlling almost the entire Ministry of Magic, while Augusta Longbottom was protected by Albus Dumbledore, a powerful wizard of Special Grade, and one of the leaders of the Wizengamot. - LongSongGolden2dReplied to DaoOfCulture
even the wand length was given in cm.
The punch hit Narcissa's arm, which she had skillfully defended, anticipating the boy's attack. She was pushed back several meters, but before Asterion could get excited, she spun around and mercilessly kicked her cousin's ribs. - LongSongGolden2dCommented"They're elegant attire," Arcturus responded briefly, unconcerned about the sarcastic smile on his great-niece's lips.
- LongSongGolden2dReplied to PrometheeWell, swallowing the dirtiest thing humanity has to offer daily does incredible things to someone's mind.