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Er Ya watched his retreating figure, her face flushing with anticipation, "Brother Gu Yang is so handsome, if only I could marry him someday..."- ali_seifi6dCommented
So the dead guy was supposed to be the one to receive these right ?
[Child of Vanitas] - ali_seifi1mthCommented
Wasnt the water cut off ?
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Why is there a gun on the bed and not bedise it ?
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Author is chinese chracters are western?, so naturally there are some discrepancies in the story
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Lol
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Too fast!
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That sounds exactly like CN main charachter
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How convenient
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Author was trying hard to create the mlst miserable mam possible
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Lol Batman holds a grudge for Robin
"I see, I'll have to double my efforts in investigating these... Parademons." Batman turned away as he prepared to leave. "I suggest you look for Flash, although I doubt he'll beat you, I don't think you'll defeat him. Besides, I think Robin has a beautiful alien woman on his team..." - ali_seifi2mthCommented
Happy Singles Day XD
Happy Valentine's Day... unless you are like me and enjoy being single hahaha. - ali_seifi2mthCommented
At this point Batman should be creating a Men's Alliance Against Allen otherwise no hero will get his heroine XD
"It's too dangerous; it's too dangerous!" - ali_seifi2mthCommented
Bingo
"Or is this kindness limited to women only?" Batman closed his eyes to remember all the information about Allen once again. - ali_seifi2mthCommented
Lol hestia using emoticons is overkill
Hestia – Now I regret giving her my blessing :/ - ali_seifi2mthCommented
My heart 💔
She looked up with puffed cheeks and a red face, "Those aren't men! They're stupid, weak, impulsive, ugly..." - ali_seifi2mthCommented
Then Cheers 🥂
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I think the pacing was alright, like in 300 chapters you described 10 years worth of events soooo if you have planned untill the current date, 20 more in-novel years, that would be another 700 chapters and a total of more than 1000 which is quite alot for a fanfic (tho its not really one but still XD)... So if you're asking me i would say the pacing is alright and actually a little bit of speed up would be better I guess Of course i bave no idea how you have envisioned the novel's ending
(I believe the novel is progressing too quickly, so I thought about slowing down a bit. Let me know if you have any objections.) - ali_seifi2mthCommented
Lol i love author's writing style
– Kyaa, please tie me up!!