blacknight29
I just skimmed through chap 6 & 7 I'm not sure how to feel about the incest tho. The story more or less a horny teenager reincarnated in Knb, none yaoi is good tho I won't mention grammar since it's already covered by the author. I really hope you focus more on the basketball side and less on the relationship since it doesn't really serve a purpose in Knb unless it's Momoi as you can develop it better than just pure smut without any real emotional attachment besides there family and he's cute or some dumbass reason that's as meaningless and stupid as love at first sight(Raw physical attraction no real emotions) But yeah my review rating may change in the future but yeah as I skimmed through I don't remember everything but he has Kiseβs copy ability which is OP but if he could get something unique to him that would be cool and highly appreciated. Well GL with your novel.
Thx for telling us that youβll be back: Btw if you want some inspiration for the future matches on how to describe a game you could read some basketball novel here or « Rebirth in Kuroko BasketΒ Β» And please donβt make a stupid huge harem with tons of girls just ichika,his mom, momoi and maybe the coach of seirin. Having multiple gfs will just ruin the story π
The grammar is better than most novels, but you have to realize that English is not the Author's first language so read it with that in mind. The author updates daily now which is nice. Though the chapters are very short. Probably 500-800 words give or take. The Mc is OP and good looking. There is Wincest and Polygamy in this story. You should give it a try at least.