i am speechless after reading this mtl So trashy Not worth reading ........................................................................

don't read it yet, but i hope it'll good and did not stop in the middle. hfiydigd dohfhohcohfkhcohcohclhcogdohdkysktskgsogskgsigsigxkgxogdc

The Grammar is so bad, I can't get the important points of this story if I can't read it properly. If you Are a mtl reader, Maybe this is not a problem for you, but for a person who have bad English and need google translate this story is suck.

very very promising story but very poorly executed. My impression after reading this novel is "Gangster Wannabe", It's very rigid and there's not an element of tension there should be. The author of this story may have a head full of ideas, but he is a writer who is not able to put his ideas into a good story.

many years have passed but the chunin exam arc is far from over. Until One Piece ends, then the chunin exam arc is over. For love of God please Speed ​​up this arc.

I am feeling very stupid after reading this stupid Novel about 40+- chapter, Writing Quality 4 Stars: can be read Easily. Updating Stability 3 stars: default. Story' Development 1 star: Too unreasonable and hard to understand, one chapter is cut into several chapters and it is very annoying and makes you lazy to continue reading. Character Design 2 Stars: MC has no characteristics, His strength is domineering for his age but His personality is like Beta MC, There are so many flaws in this novel's character design but I can't say it because so many. World Background 3 stars: Default.

Not read yet, but since this is a Kingdom fanfic so i give 5 star. Hope it good to read and the plot is not dumb. .......................

Does'nt make any sense, i fell so dumb after read this chapter.

I hope my sense would wrong, but i can feeling some NTR'ish in this chapter.

oh, I thought this is fanfic is continue not plagiarism, thx for the info mate. what is the name of this fanfic on ff.net the mate?

although the quality of the writing is not good, but this story is very interesting. This story is not a GOT story that usually only has magic and op technology, but an experienced general who is reincarnated into the world of GOT. Very Unique and worth reading, I'll give this Fanfic: Translation Quality: 3 Star Updating Stability: 4 Star And the rest of it is: 5 Star. Rate 4.4, Overall this fanfic is recommended.

First time see Sousei no Onmyouji Fanfic, hope it good....................... .......................................... .......,........(...)

Waiting days after days just to read the people reaction after see the movie in the bioskop

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I had a feeling that this 4 chapter is a 1 long chapter that split into 4.

Cause i am a Man, i wan't some Action, Fight, Battle, Brotherhood, No NTR, Adrenaline. That's how Man Especially Teenager dreaming of.

Let's Rank this Fanfic with me Translation Quality= 4 Stars Updating Stability= 4 Stars Story Development= 5 Stars Character Design= 5 Stars World Background= 5 Stars. The character writing is still basic and quite difficult to read for ordinary people but it can still be read slowly. Updating Stability is not yet known whether it will be as stable as it is now. The story development is very interesting and unique among other One Piece fanfiction, And the addition of Anime Gate: Jietai also makes this fanfic more unique and interesting. The Character Design is very good and well executed, Doesn't make the reader feel weird, It even makes the reader curious about what the continuation of the story will be. The background of the world is no longer in doubt because the One Piece Anime is great. My hope is for the author to improve his vocabulary to make it easier to read. Like People said, This Fanfic is Hidden Gem. Approved.

Let's Rank this Fanfic with me. Translation Quality: 4 Stars. Update Stability: 3 Stars. Story Development: 4 Stars. Character Design: 4 Stars. World Background: 5 Stars. The role of MC in the early chapters is not conveyed to the readers well, this fanfic has many things that could be made better, like Make a chapter about MC before he became Nomu and something like that, Overall this Fanfic is worthy to read for some people and some other people maybe wouldn't like this fanfic because Very few shonen elements, and has no comedic elements. BTW This fanfic is not too Mature Genre but not too Shonen Genre either, like in the middle of that.

I haven't read this fanfiction yet. but this is my first time seeing Jormungand fanfic on this site. So I give it a try who knows this story will be interesting.

that's why this story is predictable. The MC doesn't have the necessary training for warfare and already arrogantly wants to be transmigrated to the war era. MC just by killing a lot of Uchiha members and allowing the rest to escape did he think no trouble would knock on his door? And also the part MC escaping from Madara and then being saved by the Kamikaze Clan Farmers is too pushy, MC Doesn't think about how his Clan Members are fighting or think about his Father. Lame and suck MC.