Can't say much except that the grammar is awful, can't read the story properly without stopping to understand what the writer tried to say. Like you can understand it but the bad grammar makes you stop every so often to comprehend the meaning which ruins the reading experience.
blacknight29
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LIKELol sure man, just cause you can barely make out some sentences in english I suck at it. And terrible writer =\= I don't know english lol. But whatever man, can't even take a review without fucking crying me a river.
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Inferno_Vor:Lol sure man, just cause you can barely make out some sentences in english I suck at it. And terrible writer =\= I don't know english lol. But whatever man, can't even take a review without fucking crying me a river.
Chill dude no need to insult him, he just said your english is not good (btw i saw waaaaayyy worse, but i can't really speak or write english myself sooo yeah...) atleast you got 3 stars for his review, some others would gave you 1 so don't hate him😅(you always seem like a chill dude so these insults where kinda unexpected lol.😅)
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Well what can I say man, I already said in synopsis that the english is not good, so don't read it. Let me ask you something, if there are 2 doors both are open in other side of one of the door is a normal room, while another one is a room filled with bombs and killers, outside the door it's written (safe) on normal one, while (dangerous) on another one. And you still go in the dangerous one and after entering you start saying it's dangerous, I'll die here, blah blah...so now its not the fault of the room is it?
Kokushibou:Chill dude no need to insult him, he just said your english is not good (btw i saw waaaaayyy worse, but i can't really speak or write english myself sooo yeah...) atleast you got 3 stars for his review, some others would gave you 1 so don't hate him😅(you always seem like a chill dude so these insults where kinda unexpected lol.😅)
Well what can I say man, I already said in synopsis that the english is not good, so don't read it. Let me ask you something, if there are 2 doors both are open in other side of one of the door is a normal room, while another one is a room filled with bombs and killers, outside the door it's written (safe) on normal one, while (dangerous) on another one. And you still go in the dangerous one and after entering you start saying it's dangerous, I'll die here, blah blah...so now its not the fault of the room is it?
Kokushibou:Chill dude no need to insult him, he just said your english is not good (btw i saw waaaaayyy worse, but i can't really speak or write english myself sooo yeah...) atleast you got 3 stars for his review, some others would gave you 1 so don't hate him😅(you always seem like a chill dude so these insults where kinda unexpected lol.😅)
True, but he still only said what the problem is. I guess even if you said the english is bad, people still complain.😅 anyway just do your stuff and pls don't drop.👉👌👍
blacknight29:Well what can I say man, I already said in synopsis that the english is not good, so don't read it. Let me ask you something, if there are 2 doors both are open in other side of one of the door is a normal room, while another one is a room filled with bombs and killers, outside the door it's written (safe) on normal one, while (dangerous) on another one. And you still go in the dangerous one and after entering you start saying it's dangerous, I'll die here, blah blah...so now its not the fault of the room is it?
Kokushibou:True, but he still only said what the problem is. I guess even if you said the english is bad, people still complain.😅 anyway just do your stuff and pls don't drop.👉👌👍
In an hour or so and I may do slow updates sometimes but I won't drop...thats my ninja way dattebayo!!
Kokushibou:That is what they all say and then they drop.😭 anyway do you when the next chapter is done?
Nice hyped already🤗 and about slow updates i mean as long you don't drop it's ok (of course if you upload 1 chapter a week only, that would be slow, but if you upload 1 or 2 chapters a day, that would be amazing. Because most authors only upload 1 chapter in idk every 3 days or so and then they do without telling the readers a 1 to 5 week hiatus some even months! Like wtf and then they come randomly back and say "yeah i needed time off, im finally back!" Like atleast tell us you go or need a break..... but anyway love your stuff💚
blacknight29:In an hour or so and I may do slow updates sometimes but I won't drop...thats my ninja way dattebayo!!
Well no worries I'll make excuses if I don't wanna write😁😁 already uploaded the chapter btw tell me if there are mistakes nd will correct it.
Kokushibou:Nice hyped already🤗 and about slow updates i mean as long you don't drop it's ok (of course if you upload 1 chapter a week only, that would be slow, but if you upload 1 or 2 chapters a day, that would be amazing. Because most authors only upload 1 chapter in idk every 3 days or so and then they do without telling the readers a 1 to 5 week hiatus some even months! Like wtf and then they come randomly back and say "yeah i needed time off, im finally back!" Like atleast tell us you go or need a break..... but anyway love your stuff💚
Well no worries I'll make excuses if I don't wanna write😁😁 already uploaded the chapter btw tell me if there are mistakes nd will correct it.
Kokushibou:Nice hyped already🤗 and about slow updates i mean as long you don't drop it's ok (of course if you upload 1 chapter a week only, that would be slow, but if you upload 1 or 2 chapters a day, that would be amazing. Because most authors only upload 1 chapter in idk every 3 days or so and then they do without telling the readers a 1 to 5 week hiatus some even months! Like wtf and then they come randomly back and say "yeah i needed time off, im finally back!" Like atleast tell us you go or need a break..... but anyway love your stuff💚