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BleakSky
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I just skimmed through chap 6 & 7 I'm not sure how to feel about the incest tho. The story more or less a horny teenager reincarnated in Knb, none yaoi is good tho I won't mention grammar since it's already covered by the author. I really hope you focus more on the basketball side and less on the relationship since it doesn't really serve a purpose in Knb unless it's Momoi as you can develop it better than just pure smut without any real emotional attachment besides there family and he's cute or some dumbass reason that's as meaningless and stupid as love at first sight(Raw physical attraction no real emotions) But yeah my review rating may change in the future but yeah as I skimmed through I don't remember everything but he has Kise’s copy ability which is OP but if he could get something unique to him that would be cool and highly appreciated. Well GL with your novel.

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In kuroko no basket with a Basketball system (Hiatus for a while.)

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blacknight29
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Well there will be sex scenes in few chapters aside that it will be only about basketball and yeah I'm not good with romance so I don't know how it will come out with momoi but I'll try.

BleakSky
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You know you don't have to add Momoi just because of my suggestion just go with what you already have and don't force it trying but if you planned on adding her to harem beforehand all I ask is that you make an effort in your endeavor and not make it as shallow as his relationship with his family :) Oh, btw I don't mind R-18 scenes I just prefer them when they serve some kind of end goal instead just cause ya can ya know? Once again wish you the best of luck author and thank you for making a non yaoi KnB fanfic. So if you have any, please recommend because for the life of me can I not find one unless it's a female protagonist which just no... Male protagonist, none yaoi well ill stop here before I can't stop lmao.

blacknight29:Well there will be sex scenes in few chapters aside that it will be only about basketball and yeah I'm not good with romance so I don't know how it will come out with momoi but I'll try.
BleakSky
BleakSkyLv4BleakSky

You know you don't have to add Momoi just because of my suggestion just go with what you already have and don't force it trying but if you planned on adding her to harem beforehand all I ask is that you make an effort in your endeavor and not make it as shallow as his relationship with his family :) Oh, btw I don't mind R-18 scenes I just prefer them when they serve some kind of end goal instead just cause ya can ya know? Once again wish you the best of luck author and thank you for making a non yaoi KnB fanfic. So if you have any, please recommend because for the life of me can I not find one unless it's a female protagonist which just no... Male protagonist, none yaoi well ill stop here before I can't stop lmao.

blacknight29:Well there will be sex scenes in few chapters aside that it will be only about basketball and yeah I'm not good with romance so I don't know how it will come out with momoi but I'll try.