Review Detail of Arny in In kuroko no basket with a Basketball system (Hiatus for a while.)

And such retarded review, sigh french people really suck in English no? Sala, madarachod toh gaar marao naa laura likh rahe he betichod.

I really pity your mental health if you have more than 15 years old. Moi aussi je peux balancer des insultes dans ma langue natale fils de pute.

I really pity your mental health if you have more than 15 years old. Moi aussi je peux balancer des insultes dans ma langue natale fils de pute.

😂C'est rare de voir des français ou des gens qui parlent français sur ce site. Cette histoire est-elle vraiment aussi stupide. Pas de match epic ? Et son mc rejoint kel équipe ?

Salut, Alors j’ai arrêté de lire sa « fanfiction » vers le chapitre 5-6. Soit 33% de toute sa merde. Au début la grammaire était vraiment mauvaise mais je me suis dit qu’il fallait laisser une chance, donc j’ai continué. Puis j’ai adoré l’anime et les novels sur le sport sont souvent intéressantes. Mais quand j’ai vu à quel point c’était gamin, le MC était complètement enfantin, irréfléchi, l’histoire irréaliste ( R-18 à 6 ans le mec, trouve la logique ), et bah j’ai pas eu envie de continuer. Comment tu veux qu’il écrive un match entier épique s’il ne sait même pas écrire un début de fanfiction basique ?? Je n’aime pas forcément les harems, mais si l’histoire est bien écrite, je m’en fiche. Je n’aime pas forcément les lemons, mais si l’histoire continue son fil sans centraliser la fanfiction sur du lemon, je m’en fiche. Je n’aime pas forcément quand la grammaire anglaise est massacrée, mais si l’histoire est originale et intéressante, je m’en fous. Je n’aime pas quand le MC est débile / gamin, parce que je n’arrive pas à me mettre dans la peau du MC et à l’apprécier, mais si l’auteur le fait se développer et que le MC grandit mentalement aussi, alors je m’en fiche. Mais cet auteur ne respecte aucun de ces critères. Donc, verdict final : c’est de la merde. Faire une review alors que j’ai lu que 1/3 de son ‘travail’, c’est un peu exagéré, mais j’ai assez lu de merde depuis plus d’un ans sur ce site, pour savoir où ce genre de vomie littéraire va finir. Bonne soirée à toi ! :)

Ouch. Yeah. Je comprend la frustration. Franchement le simple fait d'avoir un r18 avec un enfant de 6 ans est déjà suffisant pour moi de décider d'éviter cette fanfic. Merci pour l'info. Avant ke j'oublie je suis aussi un auteur. J'écris 3 story (2 fanfic and 1 original. Though the original is on pause.) story. Par sur mon statut et tu pourras les voir. Give me your opinion later 👍😁

Salut, Ok j’irai voir tout à l’heure ! Bonne soirée :)

Shouldn't you use 'retarded' instead of 'retard'?

Does it even matter ?...

If you speak about grammar, then yes.

Oh so you are from the RetardED Faction of this website, I understand now. So, what is the link between someone posting a Novel / Fanfiction with very bad grammar and someone reviewing about this Trash Novel / Fanfiction with a slight grammar mistake ? Except if you are a mad kid enjoying reading fanfiction with a 6 years old pervert, I don’t understand why you would even comment about my review ..

You need to relax your tits and stop using retarded words like a retard. I was only scrolling through the reviews to see if this fanfic worth reading or not. And just stop acting like a kid when someone points to a typo. My Goodness, you are using the most pathetic insults I've ever seen.

Alright big boy, then go point every grammar mistake in this fanfiction. You clearly commented because you wanted to fight, you just don’t point a mistake just to be kind, it is not even helpful, it is not even for me and you know it, I was just tired and mad to have lost my time on another **** fanfiction and made a small mistake. And Mister EroJaki with a Yoda Picture came just to say some **** in a **** review about a **** fanfiction. If you are so bored, go correct every grammar mistake on this trash fanfiction, it will be a lot more helpful to this trash author than to me, because his english level is so low that any comment about grammar could help him. Now, go get a life, kind sir.

Alright big boy, then go point every grammar mistake in this fanfiction. You clearly commented because you wanted to fight, you just don’t point a mistake just to be kind, it is not even helpful, it is not even for me and you know it, I was just tired and mad to have lost my time on another **** fanfiction and made a small mistake. And Mister EroJaki with a Yoda Picture came just to say some **** in a **** review about a **** fanfiction. If you are so bored, go correct every grammar mistake on this trash fanfiction, it will be a lot more helpful to this trash author than to me, because his english level is so low that any comment about grammar could help him. Now, go get a life, kind sir.

Alright big boy, then go point every grammar mistake in this fanfiction. You clearly commented because you wanted to fight, you just don’t point a mistake just to be kind, it is not even helpful, it is not even for me and you know it, I was just tired and mad to have lost my time on another **** fanfiction and made a small mistake. And Mister EroJaki with a Yoda Picture came just to say some **** in a **** review about a **** fanfiction. If you are so bored, go correct every grammar mistake on this trash fanfiction, it will be a lot more helpful to this trash author than to me, because his english level is so low that any comment about grammar could help him. Now, go get a life, kind sir.

Alright big boy, then go point every grammar mistake in this fanfiction. You clearly commented because you wanted to fight, you just don’t point a mistake just to be kind, it is not even helpful, it is not even for me and you know it, I was just tired and mad to have lost my time on another **** fanfiction and made a small mistake. And Mister EroJaki with a Yoda Picture came just to say some **** in a **** review about a **** fanfiction. If you are so bored, go correct every grammar mistake on this trash fanfiction, it will be a lot more helpful to this trash author than to me, because his english level is so low that any comment about grammar could help him. Now, go get a life, kind sir.

Alright big boy, then go point every grammar mistake in this fanfiction. You clearly commented because you wanted to fight, you just don’t point a mistake just to be kind, it is not even helpful, it is not even for me and you know it, I was just tired and mad to have lost my time on another **** fanfiction and made a small mistake. And Mister EroJaki with a Yoda Picture came just to say some **** in a **** review about a **** fanfiction. If you are so bored, go correct every grammar mistake on this trash fanfiction, it will be a lot more helpful to this trash author than to me, because his english level is so low that any comment about grammar could help him. Now, go get a life, kind sir.

Alright big boy, then go point every grammar mistake in this fanfiction. You clearly commented because you wanted to fight, you just don’t point a mistake just to be kind, it is not even helpful, it is not even for me and you know it, I was just tired and mad to have lost my time on another **** fanfiction and made a small mistake. And Mister EroJaki with a Yoda Picture came just to say some **** in a **** review about a **** fanfiction. If you are so bored, go correct every grammar mistake on this trash fanfiction, it will be a lot more helpful to this trash author than to me, because his english level is so low that any comment about grammar could help him. Now, go get a life, kind sir.

Alright big boy, then go point every grammar mistake in this fanfiction. You clearly commented because you wanted to fight, you just don’t point a mistake just to be kind, it is not even helpful, it is not even for me and you know it, I was just tired and mad to have lost my time on another **** fanfiction and made a small mistake. And Mister EroJaki with a Yoda Picture came just to say some **** in a **** review about a **** fanfiction. If you are so bored, go correct every grammar mistake on this trash fanfiction, it will be a lot more helpful to this trash author than to me, because his english level is so low that any comment about grammar could help him. Now, go get a life, kind sir.

Alright big boy, then go point every grammar mistake in this fanfiction. You clearly commented because you wanted to fight, you just don’t point a mistake just to be kind, it is not even helpful, it is not even for me and you know it, I was just tired and mad to have lost my time on another **** fanfiction and made a small mistake. And Mister EroJaki with a Yoda Picture came just to say some **** in a **** review about a **** fanfiction. If you are so bored, go correct every grammar mistake on this trash fanfiction, it will be a lot more helpful to this trash author than to me, because his english level is so low that any comment about grammar could help him. Now, go get a life, kind sir.