Reviews of Aura of Magic

Writing Quality: [[5 STARS]]__Why?__ >>Well, the flow is very smooth and mellow. Not too~ complicated like an exaggeratedly complex documentary. The literature used easily shows the work and contemplation put behind it before publishing. It's easy on the lips(or ears or whatever). Stability of Updates: [[4 STARS]]__Why?__ >>Why did I not give 5 sensual stars to this category? Updating itself is a matter that questions the author(s)'s commitment, passion and whatever, it may sometimes not be the will of the author(s) that he/she fails to update regularly. I'd like to encourage the author to go an extra mile in updating since I would one day love to see this book in the Top 10 power rankings. Nevertheless, it's still awesome! Story Development: [[5 STARS]]__Why?__ >>May lightning strike me if I dare say that the story development is less to wonderful!! Character Design: [[5 STARS]]__Why?__ >>I think I've said a lot already. Of course, I'd LOVE to say more but I'm afraid that I'll 'accidentally' spoil the whole story XD World Background: [[5 STARS]] >>...

Ah, this is beautiful! Aurora is such a strong lead, I absolutely love her personality, sweet and a little sarcastic, its really refeshing! She has great dynamics with the other characters, who are all so well scripted too! Its such a pleasure to read such a well fleshed out story, the world building elements are really strong, and I like how the author doesn't reveal everything all at once, but let's the plot unravel at a nice pace. The writing is fantastic, beautifully detailed- I could picture everything so clearly, it really felt like I have been scooped up and put in that world! Author, you have some amazing skills!

Keep working hard! Stay consistent with updates, nice so far. Loving the theme of the story so far. Hoping to see lots of improvements in your writing in the future.

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Not bad, live the story so far and can’t wait for more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

If there's one thing I dislike with cultivation novels it is an slow start. Any way some one's going to die, and some one's going to become a side kick.. it's usually annoying when authors take forever to get there ..but in this novel, that part is palatable. Author's language quality and the well formed description of scenery makes up for it. Good job. Try it. It just might be your cup of tea.

This novel was written so well. I think this is the kind that I need to learn from. In my view, this will become popular in the future as I saw only several chaps but it already has that kind of views. I am very happy to experience such wonderful work and Kudos! Peace ✌️

It's not really my type of a story. However, it is still well written, and both the world and its characters are amazingly built. All in all, an excellent job, author.

The story is great, there are only a few small problems I have with it. First, there is confusing narration where actions are not fully described or reasons for actions not being fleshed out. Like in the first chapter when the girl was hit in the head and the crowd was told to leave. The crowd simply dispersed from a shout of an unknown person, and without much thought either. Were they afraid? or did they simply not want to offend someone stronger than them? Who is the Song Family? Small things that need to be explained. That's all.

Loving this book! The writing is very articulate, making it very easy to read, which I always look for. I'm a sucker for re-incarnation stories and game systems, and this book really fills my hunger! I'm glad to see that the author moved the novel to amazon, I find it a lot easier to read there, but I'm looking forward to updates here! Keep posting ^_^

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This is a great book with a balanced MC in a very interesting world. The writing quality is superb and everything flows so smoothly. It's actually hard to think that this is the author's first book. I reccommend this book even through it hasn't progressed so far story-wise, I still really like this.

Author here again. Just want to ask that everyone who reads it, if possible, to leave feedback when there are any mistakes present, or If the story feels convoluted or doesn't make sense. Thanks !

I like it so far. There are a few mistakes here and there but it is pretty easy to read. The story is moving at a decent pace without feeling rushed. The main is likeable and it is nice not to have someone who is stupid. Thank you for this looking forward to more!

Quite a lot of effort is being put into this novel. I really appreciate this in you, author. The writing quality of the novel is great. The characters (very few at present) are well defined. The story is developing nicely. World background is good too. Keep it up.

Nice story. I really like the system the Mc has. The story and pacing is also good though quite fast at the start. The MC also has a really nice attitude. So good luck.

The writing still flows nicely and the story has been progressing well. Keep up the content, and just maybe build the world a bit more and develop some side characters!

A lot of thought has been put into the world and plot. Very detailed, and definitely a lot of love put into the story. Definitely has an intriguing plot, and is definitely entertaining. My one criticism is that the characters are a little flat. They move the plot forward along nicely, but they don't seem to have any will of their own, getting swept up by the plot instead of making choices that will impact the story. Other than that, no complaints. Grammar and writing quality is good. Starts off a little passive, but gets progressively better each chapter. Also has some nice funny moments. Keep writing, you'll definitely get better!

This type of story is new to me yet I found it interesting. The game and the place was describe and explained well so it was easy for me to understand the story. I also liked the personality of the ML, he was really determined to learn about his acquired skill and even the place. On top of that, he could be funny in his own ways. He really entertained me throughout the chapters. I strongly recommend this book. Respect to the author. P.S. Author please get a girlfriend for ML, you know he's a hopeless romantic in his previous world. Kekeke